Spirited Justice
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Comment from royowen
How interesting is that? Obviously Henry was right, William could disappear through cracks nobody could imagine, it sounds like a plot from mission impossible, where the writer of the script is in charge ofvtge escape, but I'm sure Garth will find him, beautifully written, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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How interesting is that? Obviously Henry was right, William could disappear through cracks nobody could imagine, it sounds like a plot from mission impossible, where the writer of the script is in charge ofvtge escape, but I'm sure Garth will find him, beautifully written, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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All I can say is that Garth isn't very happy about this turn of events and he most definitely will continue to track William (even if it carries him into another story) LOL Thanks as always, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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I can see that
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm hoping the next chapter, (the last?) will follow fast, as I've saved a six for it. Bryce was right, but it might be that William is not quite as clever as he thought he was. I don't think that German consulate is going to enjoy the next meeting he is going to have with Garth. I'm really looking forward the that. Well done, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I'm hoping the next chapter, (the last?) will follow fast, as I've saved a six for it. Bryce was right, but it might be that William is not quite as clever as he thought he was. I don't think that German consulate is going to enjoy the next meeting he is going to have with Garth. I'm really looking forward the that. Well done, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I'm working on it as we speak, Sandra. Just trying to make sure I don't leave anything blowing in the wind that should have been finished off. I hate writing the last chapter because I'm always afraid someone is going to say...but you missed this ...which is very possible. And in my mind...the German Consulate isn't going to appreciate Garth.... he might even need to be rescued. LOL Glad you enjoyed this chapter and hopefully I have the last one done for tomorrow or Saturday at the latest. I've got a wedding to go to and I would like to post something new on Sunday....Great ambitions. Thanks as always.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know Garth won't allow William to get away for long. I do like this story.
His gaze shifted between the two men and he smirked, "And just like that, the whole operation fell apart." (smirked. Smirked is a facial expression not a speech.)
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I know Garth won't allow William to get away for long. I do like this story.
His gaze shifted between the two men and he smirked, "And just like that, the whole operation fell apart." (smirked. Smirked is a facial expression not a speech.)
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks as always, Barbara. The final chapter is ready to post. It's long but I hope worth it. I didn't want to seperate the ending. Appreciate your reviews and assistance throughout the book. thank you so much. Smiles, Carol