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Comment from RJ Heritage
They are grateful creatures indeed. They sometimes remind me of ghostly images gliding on a quiet body of water. These birds make me reflect on my own life. Beautiful and grateful.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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They are grateful creatures indeed. They sometimes remind me of ghostly images gliding on a quiet body of water. These birds make me reflect on my own life. Beautiful and grateful.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
Comment from DonandVicki
I plan to enter the 5-7-5 poetry contest, and I can see that I will have stiff competition. An impressive artwork that enhances your poem. A strong statement of tranquility and grace. Don
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I plan to enter the 5-7-5 poetry contest, and I can see that I will have stiff competition. An impressive artwork that enhances your poem. A strong statement of tranquility and grace. Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Dan
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
Tranquillity and grace certainly characterise the white heron, and this is reflected ion your careful choice of appropriate words for the image. Beautifully composed.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Tranquillity and grace certainly characterise the white heron, and this is reflected ion your careful choice of appropriate words for the image. Beautifully composed.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I didn't know about the association with tranquility and grace but I can understand it now. Your charming post 'reflects' those qualities with style. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I didn't know about the association with tranquility and grace but I can understand it now. Your charming post 'reflects' those qualities with style. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
There really is nothing that compares to the beauty of a heron or egret. They look so peaceful. They are so elegant looking. You have written a beautifully descriptive poem. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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There really is nothing that compares to the beauty of a heron or egret. They look so peaceful. They are so elegant looking. You have written a beautifully descriptive poem. Gretchen
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. Herons are the topic of many haiku in Japan.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely for the 575 contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely evening and may God bless you. Stay safe, Patricia.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This is very nicely for the 575 contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely evening and may God bless you. Stay safe, Patricia.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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It's so good to hear from you. Thank you very much, Patricia
Gypsy 😊