Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

My dear Iza I am so happy to see you here again. You've been missed but I have a smile on my face, not only because you returned, but you've written your "REMAKE" story so well. The love affair with the Ocean grabbed me immediately...I to find peace when it's me and Mr. Ocean. Excellent job!

I could sense the peace in the way you wrote. Not choppy or blazing hot -- smooth, content with a vision for the future -- YOUR VISION, not theirs.

So happy to see you, Iza. Happy writing!
Smiles and hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024

Thank you so much Carol, I am kind lost between multiple tasks: dancing, writing a blog, school, work, cats and try to drop a line or two here. But I just need to shake my laziness away:) and do a better job with my life.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Haven't seen you for a while. You should check out my theodore stories1.2.3.4. Fun to write. You did good work here. Hope you cast out some of the bad feelings with this release. Karen

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024

thank you Karen, i have been out... just paied my outstanding fees for the membership:) I am actually trying to put this in a memoir... but you know me, I drop projects like flies

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-Oct-2024

I pay once a year cheaper that way.:-)