Little things
A six-word poem50 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your six word poem captures the essence of life perfectly. It is all about the small moments which add up to our lives. Excellent use of words to create a meaningful poem.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Your six word poem captures the essence of life perfectly. It is all about the small moments which add up to our lives. Excellent use of words to create a meaningful poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Mermaids. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Mark D. R.
So cute and so true! Your selected photograph is precious and enhances your overall presentation value.
"Potpourri" may have been a substitute for your "collections" if I had written this poem and wanted to bring in one of the senses to the 'feel' of this charming poem LOL
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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So cute and so true! Your selected photograph is precious and enhances your overall presentation value.
"Potpourri" may have been a substitute for your "collections" if I had written this poem and wanted to bring in one of the senses to the 'feel' of this charming poem LOL
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Mark, and for the sixth star. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
PS With "potpourri " I might have nailed the contest!
Comment from Frank Malley
A single, acute perception about human life is presented in this six-word poem. It is indeed the small moments that can reliably countermand the larger and more dire events of human existence, and this author aligns with wise commentators throughout history who value moments spent in wonder at the small and wonderful so abundant in the world around us.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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A single, acute perception about human life is presented in this six-word poem. It is indeed the small moments that can reliably countermand the larger and more dire events of human existence, and this author aligns with wise commentators throughout history who value moments spent in wonder at the small and wonderful so abundant in the world around us.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Frank. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from BethShelby
This says a lot in six words. That is the way I see life as well. I remember a song the Gathers used to sing the really liked. I think it was We have this Moment. Simple moment of pure joy like a cup of coffee with someone you care about or like you picture, a flower picked for you by a child. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This says a lot in six words. That is the way I see life as well. I remember a song the Gathers used to sing the really liked. I think it was We have this Moment. Simple moment of pure joy like a cup of coffee with someone you care about or like you picture, a flower picked for you by a child. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Beth. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have used your six words well
with a good topic.
-I like how you formatted the poem
by introducing the topic of life.
-A very good description of what
it means to you.
-A good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have used your six words well
with a good topic.
-I like how you formatted the poem
by introducing the topic of life.
-A very good description of what
it means to you.
-A good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Pam. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
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You are very welcome, Tony.
Comment from Nicki.B
Absolutely! The small little moments are just as, if not more than important to us than the ever. I love the sentiment and message of your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Absolutely! The small little moments are just as, if not more than important to us than the ever. I love the sentiment and message of your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Nicki. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
I am terrible at writing such small poems. I use lots of words when I write, and cutting them down to six would drive me bonkers.
I do think you did an amazing job with your six words. Your definition of life is splendid, for it truly is what you say. The picture adds much to the point. We collect up all these small moments and weave them together into memories, and this is our life, in hindsight. Not to mention the small moments we experience right now and the ones yet to come.
Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Hello!
I am terrible at writing such small poems. I use lots of words when I write, and cutting them down to six would drive me bonkers.
I do think you did an amazing job with your six words. Your definition of life is splendid, for it truly is what you say. The picture adds much to the point. We collect up all these small moments and weave them together into memories, and this is our life, in hindsight. Not to mention the small moments we experience right now and the ones yet to come.
Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Patrick. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Charles D Ezell
For sure, poet. It is the little things that says it all. Nothing like a child and how precious the moments. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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For sure, poet. It is the little things that says it all. Nothing like a child and how precious the moments. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Charles, and for the sixth star. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from gramalot8
Love your cute photo showcasing such a cute small moment. So many special moments in life include family, especially children. Great job and thanks for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Love your cute photo showcasing such a cute small moment. So many special moments in life include family, especially children. Great job and thanks for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Gramalot. Appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
You did a terrific job with your six words. These things are hard to put together. That's a great way to describe life--a collection of small moments. Those are the times we remember and like to think about over and over. Great artwork to accompany. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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You did a terrific job with your six words. These things are hard to put together. That's a great way to describe life--a collection of small moments. Those are the times we remember and like to think about over and over. Great artwork to accompany. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks very much for your kind words, Judi.