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A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
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Comment from
barbara.wilkey
I had a feeling Bay Lynn was also a shifter. I am wondering how the police are going to handle this. It appears they left no evidence. I am hoping they didn't, and Helen will be all right. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
Thank you, Barbara, for this excellent review. Yup, Bay Lynn was hiding her secret. In the beginning, when she gave her essence to Dodie Rae, she made it seem she'd relinquished her wolf. Surprise, lol. I couldn't wait until Sunday to put this one out. Hopefully, I can have another chapter by Sunday as well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from
royowen
So, another victim bites the dust so to speak, at this rate there aren't going to be too many abusive around for much longer, but no worry there are plenty in the world it seems, even here in Oz, another great post Steve, blessings Roy
Typo : no but(t)s Dodie Rae.
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
Thank you, Roy. Yup, another one down with a bit of a twist. I always appreciate your reviews, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by royowen on 03-Oct-2024
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