Happy's Haunted House
Happy's a Happy Clown41 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi,
You did well with this acrostic prompt for the club.
The only problem I see is in line 8. because laughed
seems a little bit force and ungrammatical. Maybe
It can be Determine to get back, no the clown laughed.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Debi,
You did well with this acrostic prompt for the club.
The only problem I see is in line 8. because laughed
seems a little bit force and ungrammatical. Maybe
It can be Determine to get back, no the clown laughed.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week
Joan
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Joan, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem
Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a wrong turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
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You are most kindly welcome, Debi.
Joan
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Lol. Debi, I liked your poem and happy. The rhymes were very good. I liked when you turned him into IT. This is a funny poem. Well written.
The picture is very colorful and Happy is soo cute. Love, Brenda
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Lol. Debi, I liked your poem and happy. The rhymes were very good. I liked when you turned him into IT. This is a funny poem. Well written.
The picture is very colorful and Happy is soo cute. Love, Brenda
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Brenda, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem
Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a wrong turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Harry Craft
Lol! Oh this is a great Halloween Poem Debi! I like that format where you use the first letter to create a word running down the side of the poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Lol! Oh this is a great Halloween Poem Debi! I like that format where you use the first letter to create a word running down the side of the poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Harry, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem
Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a wrong turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
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Well, it worked and that is all that counts!
Comment from Frank Malley
The turnabout that comes with adolescence is sometimes very mean, and it takes pleasure in despising things that had been delights only years before. It's great that Happy the clown gets to defend innocent pleasures with sweet revenge.
I have to question the event we called "Mischief Night;" it occurred on the night before Halloween when I was a kid, and, alas, I participated with enthusiasm in activities that annoyed our neighbors, which included ringing bells, turning over garbage pails, throwing eggs at passing cars, and - despicably - throwing carved pumpkins into the street. (I never did this last - I liked carved pumpkins too much.)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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The turnabout that comes with adolescence is sometimes very mean, and it takes pleasure in despising things that had been delights only years before. It's great that Happy the clown gets to defend innocent pleasures with sweet revenge.
I have to question the event we called "Mischief Night;" it occurred on the night before Halloween when I was a kid, and, alas, I participated with enthusiasm in activities that annoyed our neighbors, which included ringing bells, turning over garbage pails, throwing eggs at passing cars, and - despicably - throwing carved pumpkins into the street. (I never did this last - I liked carved pumpkins too much.)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Hi Frank, this is so far out of my comfort zone that I do not watch horror movies, would not allow my kids to watch them, I never made horror type costumes for them, and we just didn't do the blood and guts thing here.
SO WHAT HAPPENED TO ME WITH THIS POST??
I don't know? I was writing away and Happy was supposed to stay happy and all of a sudden a dark side came over me, and lo and behold, it was kinda fun... so I went with it... LOL.
Go figure! It was just one of those days I shoved the Pollyanna (what my kids call me) in the trunk and pulled out Sybil! haha!
Love ya Frank! Debi
Comment from gansach
Yikes! Happy is a pretty scary guy. I wouldn't want to be on his bad side. This is a great poem for your club entry of Haunted House Acrostic. Perfect picture and nice rhyming. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Yikes! Happy is a pretty scary guy. I wouldn't want to be on his bad side. This is a great poem for your club entry of Haunted House Acrostic. Perfect picture and nice rhyming. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Gail, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem
Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a wrong turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from mermaids
This is a great Halloween poem that reads like a movie. It also reminds me of Stephen King's works, do not mess with a clown. Your poem is creative and unique with the acrostic form, one of my favorite poetic forms.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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This is a great Halloween poem that reads like a movie. It also reminds me of Stephen King's works, do not mess with a clown. Your poem is creative and unique with the acrostic form, one of my favorite poetic forms.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Elaine, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem
Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a wrong turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
So Happy is not exactly a genial soul. His mask ripped off his true face came out and the his revenge proves it .Debi this could be metaphorical. Happy could be any one ...Great acrostic.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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So Happy is not exactly a genial soul. His mask ripped off his true face came out and the his revenge proves it .Debi this could be metaphorical. Happy could be any one ...Great acrostic.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Santha, thanks so much for your kind review for my spooky Acrostic Poem. Happy was supposed to stay happy, but it took a turn somehow. LOL.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved this Debi, this was a fun read for Halloween. I've never liked clowns, so I probably would've stayed well clear from him even if his name was Happy. A well written piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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I loved this Debi, this was a fun read for Halloween. I've never liked clowns, so I probably would've stayed well clear from him even if his name was Happy. A well written piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Jacob, I am not sure what happened in that haunted house because something sure changed. Happy was supposed to stay happy and I do not even remember when it turned dark. But it was sure fun being on the dark side for a change,,, after all it is the season. Thanks for the fun review.
Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
You would fit right in in the Little Workshop of Horrors!
You've always been a little terror. I wish you well with the acrostic event. What an ugly mug he had before the gang took it. Vengeance is mine, I will repay saith Happy! K xx
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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You would fit right in in the Little Workshop of Horrors!
You've always been a little terror. I wish you well with the acrostic event. What an ugly mug he had before the gang took it. Vengeance is mine, I will repay saith Happy! K xx
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Hey you, we could do a lot of damage with our silly minds. Haha. Would you believe I have never written anything so dark before, but I have to admit it was kinda fun. Thanks so much for having some fun with this one with me. When I set out to do the poem, Happy was supposed to stay happy.
Then what happened? I started having fun with a little dark side. So it only happened once, I promise. Hahaha. Thanks again for your fun comments and for your six stars. Spooky!! Love, Debi
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There is Yin and Yang, black and white.
Not bad, just balance.:-) or :-(
Comment from Nicki.B
This is an excellent poem Debbie. Clowns are definitely not my favourite so this really did give me the creeps! Aaaagghhh! Happy's happy to get his revenge, I would imagine Happy is indeed ecstatic, lol! Oh the heebie jeebies! Well done Deb.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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This is an excellent poem Debbie. Clowns are definitely not my favourite so this really did give me the creeps! Aaaagghhh! Happy's happy to get his revenge, I would imagine Happy is indeed ecstatic, lol! Oh the heebie jeebies! Well done Deb.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Hi Nicki, I am not sure what happened in that haunted house because something sure changed. Happy was supposed to stay happy and I do not even remember when it turned dark. But it was sure fun being on the dark side for a change,,, after all it is the season. Thanks for the fun review.
Love, Debi
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Clowns are definitely great characters to go creepy that's why your pen swayed that way lol! What a great season I'm sure we'll be swarmed with spooky stories and poems for the foreseeable haha!
Take Care Debi x
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Nicki, have I told you I just love you to pieces?
You have the bubbliest personality! You are like my bright side kick!
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Oh Dolly! You're so sweet. Something like tweedledum and tweedledee haha!