Willing Hearts
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Comment from Sankey
This was a great, dramatic read. You have a few spags this time around. Ha! Left an "o" off instead of the usual incorrect add! "That(,) to(o) was not my intent.
"Myra and Mateo are (on)their way
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This was a great, dramatic read. You have a few spags this time around. Ha! Left an "o" off instead of the usual incorrect add! "That(,) to(o) was not my intent.
"Myra and Mateo are (on)their way
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help and have made the corrections.
Comment from lyenochka
Things have really progressed in Sami and Noah's relationship. Now when he goes on rescue missions, it's not just Myra that she's worried about. She's even more worried now for Noah. It's good she gets a taste of what being married to law enforcement is like.
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Things have really progressed in Sami and Noah's relationship. Now when he goes on rescue missions, it's not just Myra that she's worried about. She's even more worried now for Noah. It's good she gets a taste of what being married to law enforcement is like.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Wendy G
Things seemed to be progressing quite smoothly, apart from Sami constantly needing a hug and to be reassured, until the sudden change with a considerable amount of drama and danger. Sami is unrealistic to expect that Noah can promise to return safely. No one can really make such promises in these conditions. I'm enjoying the story and waiting for a positive outcome, and hoping that Sami's family is not in any danger. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Things seemed to be progressing quite smoothly, apart from Sami constantly needing a hug and to be reassured, until the sudden change with a considerable amount of drama and danger. Sami is unrealistic to expect that Noah can promise to return safely. No one can really make such promises in these conditions. I'm enjoying the story and waiting for a positive outcome, and hoping that Sami's family is not in any danger. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from judiverse
I'm a bit concerned about Sami. She is coming off as terribly insecure and keeps seeking reassurance and attention. Her insecurity isn't helping Noah do his job. I hope we will see her become more mature. Convince us she's up to being the wife of someone with the responsibilities Noah has. Will he have to keep reassuring her about everything? There's a lot of tension now, as it seems Mateo and the girls they're trying to rescue, including Myra, may be in trouble. Great description of the precautions being taken, including Mateo may have backup from his own security. They have ambulances at the ready in case there are any injuries. I hope Sami doesn't try to do anything foolish but will let the experts handle it. Great dialogue. judi
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I'm a bit concerned about Sami. She is coming off as terribly insecure and keeps seeking reassurance and attention. Her insecurity isn't helping Noah do his job. I hope we will see her become more mature. Convince us she's up to being the wife of someone with the responsibilities Noah has. Will he have to keep reassuring her about everything? There's a lot of tension now, as it seems Mateo and the girls they're trying to rescue, including Myra, may be in trouble. Great description of the precautions being taken, including Mateo may have backup from his own security. They have ambulances at the ready in case there are any injuries. I hope Sami doesn't try to do anything foolish but will let the experts handle it. Great dialogue. judi
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very tense chapter. I was relieved to see Myra's name mentioned. I was starting to lose hope she would be found. Now, I'm wondering if Chen goes after Sami's family. I hope not. Great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This was a very tense chapter. I was relieved to see Myra's name mentioned. I was starting to lose hope she would be found. Now, I'm wondering if Chen goes after Sami's family. I hope not. Great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
Poor Noah, it's difficult trying to grapple the emotions of a woman, I know, although my wife is most forgiving and very gracious I know I miss the boat somehow and and sink in the emotional mire. Noah, like many men I have known is a rule breaker, mind you, it depends on the rule, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Poor Noah, it's difficult trying to grapple the emotions of a woman, I know, although my wife is most forgiving and very gracious I know I miss the boat somehow and and sink in the emotional mire. Noah, like many men I have known is a rule breaker, mind you, it depends on the rule, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
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Comment from Paul McFarland
Really good chapter, Barb. The reader is now anxious to see what took place. We need to stop the yo-yo with Noah and Sami. It is getting too predictable.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Really good chapter, Barb. The reader is now anxious to see what took place. We need to stop the yo-yo with Noah and Sami. It is getting too predictable.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was bound to happen. You get a six because you keep it all together, you keep it interesting, and I like you. I sometimes forget that series writers need the stars too. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This was bound to happen. You get a six because you keep it all together, you keep it interesting, and I like you. I sometimes forget that series writers need the stars too. :-) Karen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement and remembering use series writers. There's only a few of us on this site.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh boy.....action is heating up! Very exciting book. Hope they take down the sleaze balls. Stuff em and cuff em!
Just a suggestion:
The very end:
"I know. Noah, no matter what, come back to me."
"I will." He left.
Noah was addressing Sarah and the immediate response with no speech tag made it seem like Sarah was making the comment 'come back to me'.
Just my two cents.
Your pal,
D
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Oh boy.....action is heating up! Very exciting book. Hope they take down the sleaze balls. Stuff em and cuff em!
Just a suggestion:
The very end:
"I know. Noah, no matter what, come back to me."
"I will." He left.
Noah was addressing Sarah and the immediate response with no speech tag made it seem like Sarah was making the comment 'come back to me'.
Just my two cents.
Your pal,
D
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I made the correction. Good catch. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Jacob1395
Another engaging chapter Barbara, the dialogue is brilliant once again between your character's and I really like how Sami and Noah's relationship continues to grow. The chemistry feels very real in the beginning section. An excellent chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Another engaging chapter Barbara, the dialogue is brilliant once again between your character's and I really like how Sami and Noah's relationship continues to grow. The chemistry feels very real in the beginning section. An excellent chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.