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Sensory feast

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27 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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All the ingredients needed to make a whole and satisfying life, and with the right temperament it should rise to perfection, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you Kahpot. What a super review, also with the theme of satisfying food. Lovely.
    Wendy
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Wendy,
Your poem is eight words full of nice delicacies for a wonderful banquet. These are the best ways to escape.
Excellent poem, Wendy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Nice photo too!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you Cindy for this lovely review. Yes, these things for me are peace and happiness.
    Wendy
Comment from June Sargent
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Works for me. People ask me if I'm bored being retired. Nope. As long as I have books, music, nature and the love of family, friends and my cats - I'm good. Your 8 words captured it all in one bouquet.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you. Me too, much the same, except a dog instead of cats. Lovely review.
    Wendy
Comment from lyenochka
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I like it! You listed the top things in life that we enjoy - love of each other, nature, books and music. God knew just what to stimulate our hearts and minds. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Yes, with these He has well provided for us. Thank you for the lovely review.
    Wendy
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
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By listing "nature, music, books, and love," you've painted a rich picture of what makes life truly satisfying. The metaphor of a "banquet" beautifully conveys the idea that these elements provide a feast for the soul, emphasizing their importance in creating a fulfilling life.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you, yes, you have understood perfectly - a feast for the soul! I appreciate your fine review.
    Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Is that a cell phone in the picture, Wendy? A flower would have been a better choice, but what can I say? You have done a great job with this shortie. This should win.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
    Ah Paul, your eyes are too good! Let's say she is listening to fine music from her phone through her headphones. It was the nearest I could get for an image which contained everything!!! Lol. Thanks for the super review!
    Wendy
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Wendy,
These eight words match the picture perfectly. I look like a dream of a day for them.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

P S By the way I have just published a book called The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for a lovely review. I will check out your book tonight.
    Wendy
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Sep-2024
    You are most welcome, Wendy. Thanks for checking out my book.
    Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It doesn't get any better than that, does it? I enjoyed reading this very short poem contest entry. The challenge is to stretch this review out long than the entry. LOl Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Lol. Yes, I agree - it is very hard to review at length a piece which is so tiny! I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you.
    Wendy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Those items do sound like among the most perfect things in life. You chose a perfect picture for the poem as well. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Marilyn. I appreciate your super review and good wishes.
    Wendy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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What a glorious image, Wendy! You've definitely got me in the mood for that "satisfying banquet" (with maybe just one or two sandwiches:)). Seriously though, an excellent entry and good luck in the contest! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you for a super review - and yes, you are right - we need food as well! Thanks too for the good wishes. Much appreciated.
    Wendy