Anger
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This made me smile. Your play on words is so clever. I like the way you showed this using colors. You've written a funny and enjoyable poem thanks to an observation!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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This made me smile. Your play on words is so clever. I like the way you showed this using colors. You've written a funny and enjoyable poem thanks to an observation!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I love this, Bill. Absolutely mind boggling and I never thought of it or even realized it before. I can see why danger maybe. Regardless, very clever.
Just a little fyi that I did a thank you poem that you are part of, and hope that if you read it you take it as a complete compliment because it is sure meant that way.
I love your quirky sense of humor.
Love, debi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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I love this, Bill. Absolutely mind boggling and I never thought of it or even realized it before. I can see why danger maybe. Regardless, very clever.
Just a little fyi that I did a thank you poem that you are part of, and hope that if you read it you take it as a complete compliment because it is sure meant that way.
I love your quirky sense of humor.
Love, debi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Debi. I read the "Thank You" poem (not reviewed yet) and think I see me. Thank you back.
Comment from patcelaw
The English language is very much a surprising thing when you stop and break it down the way you have with this particular poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best for the week and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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The English language is very much a surprising thing when you stop and break it down the way you have with this particular poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best for the week and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Patricia
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
That is a very astute observation. I also find it odd that they use the words Postal and Service together. it's a weird world we live in! Thanks for keeping it weird. :-)
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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That is a very astute observation. I also find it odd that they use the words Postal and Service together. it's a weird world we live in! Thanks for keeping it weird. :-)
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Crooked politician
Comment from lyenochka
I can see that "anger" can lead to "danger" especially if a maniac who is off his rocker is armed with an automatic weapon. Now "manger" is French for "to eat" so maybe eating too much when angry could be dangerous, too.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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I can see that "anger" can lead to "danger" especially if a maniac who is off his rocker is armed with an automatic weapon. Now "manger" is French for "to eat" so maybe eating too much when angry could be dangerous, too.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Hanger can be very supportive, and a Ranger might save the day.