Comment from LJbutterfly

Exceptional

I just don't know how you think this stuff up, but I'm enjoying the heck out of it. I was terrified for Alejandro as he ran down the street, only to be captured by two goons and forced into an SUV. I love the way you build suspense without revealing outcomes until you are good and ready. Yaay! You found a way for Alejandro to get away without being killed. This was an exciting chapter. I can't begin to guess what you have in store next.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Another explosion is about to happen... Thanks so much for your awesome thoughts. I couldn't let silly Alejandro get murdered just because he was so foolish to do what ever Jose wanted him to do. So he's probably off to Candad...at least if he's smart. I was about to end my night and I am so happy that I can do it with a great big smile on my face. You ar so awesome.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

I guess Alejandro has learned not to trust his friend Angelo, but I'm glad Angelo stopped those men from killing Alejandro. Will Carlos keep his word to Angelo, or will Angelo regret being involved? One small fix: (Let's just) say they will be preoccupied.... Good chapter with lots of tension. Blessings. Carol

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

there's Eagle Eye on the job again! Thanks so much for catching that for me. It's fixed and I thank you. Appreciate the review and your thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol

reply by Carol Clark2 on 14-Sep-2024

I don't know why my brain sees those, but I guess I've trained it that way after all those years of grading papers and tests.