Haiku(thud of ripe apple)
Haiku19 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
with the apple and autumn.
-Very good descriptive words with "thud"
and "rhythmic beat."
-A very good sarori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
with the apple and autumn.
-Very good descriptive words with "thud"
and "rhythmic beat."
-A very good sarori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed it. Love the image, the sounds and can almost taste the red ripe apple falling to the ground amid the falling leaves of Autumn. My father grew up in apple country Yakima, Washington
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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you nailed it. Love the image, the sounds and can almost taste the red ripe apple falling to the ground amid the falling leaves of Autumn. My father grew up in apple country Yakima, Washington
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Superb review zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Haiku poem writing prompt. There is nothing better to do on a crisp Fall day than to go apple picking. your poem gives a wonderful description of that experience. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Haiku poem writing prompt. There is nothing better to do on a crisp Fall day than to go apple picking. your poem gives a wonderful description of that experience. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Neonewman
Beautiful Haiku, my friend. I am a fan of such structure and challenge. I wish you the best of luck in the votes. This should be a great contender.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Beautiful Haiku, my friend. I am a fan of such structure and challenge. I wish you the best of luck in the votes. This should be a great contender.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Carol Clark2
These are lovely words for the contest. I like the assonance of the 'a vowel' and the description of the sound of the apple falling. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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These are lovely words for the contest. I like the assonance of the 'a vowel' and the description of the sound of the apple falling. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Great reveiw zanya
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My pleasure. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Thud of Ripe Apple, has the proper formatting and joins the otherwise silent descent of the trees' fruits and colors. The fertile soil will welcome it all.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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This haiku, Thud of Ripe Apple, has the proper formatting and joins the otherwise silent descent of the trees' fruits and colors. The fertile soil will welcome it all.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Begin Again
Flowers, fruit, and leaves reach their full potential when the autumn breeze blows, knowing that winter is not far behind as time keeps moving forward. Nice haiku.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Flowers, fruit, and leaves reach their full potential when the autumn breeze blows, knowing that winter is not far behind as time keeps moving forward. Nice haiku.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya
Comment from TPAC
I like the ingredients used for this particular stir: questioning the placement of items. I'm thinking
rhythmic beat of time
falling amidst autumn leaves-
thud of ripe apple
Just my opinion, hoping it somehow helps.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I like the ingredients used for this particular stir: questioning the placement of items. I'm thinking
rhythmic beat of time
falling amidst autumn leaves-
thud of ripe apple
Just my opinion, hoping it somehow helps.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from papa55mike
It's finally harvest time throughout the south. A time of joy and hard work. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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It's finally harvest time throughout the south. A time of joy and hard work. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Superb review zanya
