Old Ladies Chatting
A nonet14 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I love these elderly ladies are enjoying their chatting together, I love this post, because even we oldies are can really chat particularly on these coffee mornings, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I love these elderly ladies are enjoying their chatting together, I love this post, because even we oldies are can really chat particularly on these coffee mornings, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I am always thankful when I get nice reviews such as this thank
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My privilege Pat
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know when my friends since the 80's and I get together, every Monday for lunch, we laugh and bring back good times, and sometimes, not so good times, but share them together. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for causing me to smile.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I know when my friends since the 80's and I get together, every Monday for lunch, we laugh and bring back good times, and sometimes, not so good times, but share them together. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for causing me to smile.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate
Comment from AliMom
Let me first say, I love your chosen image. It reminded me of my sister and myself and the closeness we share - two little old ladies. It's a straight-forward poem that doesn't describe or delve into any issues but just states the facts. It's an every person poem because it leaves it to the reader to decide what the old ladies are talking about, remembering and reliving. I think the use of "These" in line 1 instead of say, Some or or just "Old", or even two, upsets the concept of any old ladies. Still, I liked the nonet.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Let me first say, I love your chosen image. It reminded me of my sister and myself and the closeness we share - two little old ladies. It's a straight-forward poem that doesn't describe or delve into any issues but just states the facts. It's an every person poem because it leaves it to the reader to decide what the old ladies are talking about, remembering and reliving. I think the use of "These" in line 1 instead of say, Some or or just "Old", or even two, upsets the concept of any old ladies. Still, I liked the nonet.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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With gratitude of my heart and wish to thank you for a very nice
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a cute picture! It makes me want to laugh with these two ladies. I'd suggest 'trouble(d) lives' and 'they('ve) lived,' to keep the verb tense more current, to match your other verbs. Otherwise, a cute poem. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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What a cute picture! It makes me want to laugh with these two ladies. I'd suggest 'trouble(d) lives' and 'they('ve) lived,' to keep the verb tense more current, to match your other verbs. Otherwise, a cute poem. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by my work and these words
