Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Wow! This one still has my head spinning! You have posted back-to-back examples of your best writings. What can one say after reading this? Just looking forward to more such excellent displays of writing.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

I am most gratified to get this great review. Jim. I submitted this story and war one to be reviewed for publishment.

reply by jim vecchio on 12-Sep-2024

I feel honored to have read it first! Best wishes!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I feel like i was just on a speed cruise...and I'm not referring to a fast boat either! That was incredibly insane but don't get me wrong, i liked it....I'm just going to spend the rest of the day trying to figure out why LOL Thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thanks, Marilyn. This is not part of the 2025 program. : )

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very graphic and it's working and I felt very uncomfortable as I was reading it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Sorry if it was a bit much, Patricia.