In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Grief Goes Deep"Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
26 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an excellently written poem of grief, expressing clearly and succinctly some important truths of death and grief and friends through the processes. Hugs, Verna
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is an excellently written poem of grief, expressing clearly and succinctly some important truths of death and grief and friends through the processes. Hugs, Verna
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Verna for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Sugarray77
Hey there Dolly. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day! Your poem to Norman on the loss of his wife, Yvonne, is beautiful and flows effortlessly. I know it will be a great comfort to him. I know you have endured a similar loss and that your words come from your heart. Well written!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Hey there Dolly. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day! Your poem to Norman on the loss of his wife, Yvonne, is beautiful and flows effortlessly. I know it will be a great comfort to him. I know you have endured a similar loss and that your words come from your heart. Well written!!
Melissa
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Melissa for your review, I appreciate your kind words, love Dolly x
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are never promised tomorrow. Thank you for sharing this comforting poem for Nomi with us. I know our prayers have God wrapping His arms around Nomi and his family.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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We are never promised tomorrow. Thank you for sharing this comforting poem for Nomi with us. I know our prayers have God wrapping His arms around Nomi and his family.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Barbara for your review, I appreciate your comments, love Dolly x
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a very sympathetic-minded poem.
My favorite lines are:
The end will come for all of us,
we lend a helping hand,
as sometimes life can be unjust,
Other strong lines:
know that sorrow is a thief,
as loss can steal our sleep.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is a very sympathetic-minded poem.
My favorite lines are:
The end will come for all of us,
we lend a helping hand,
as sometimes life can be unjust,
Other strong lines:
know that sorrow is a thief,
as loss can steal our sleep.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Crystie for your review, I appreciate your attention to these lines and I am honoured by our words, love Dolly x
Comment from jim vecchio
You are to be commended for your tender words to one who is under a tremendous trial now. For all of us who have undergone such a grief, it is good to know and feel your understanding heart.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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You are to be commended for your tender words to one who is under a tremendous trial now. For all of us who have undergone such a grief, it is good to know and feel your understanding heart.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Jim for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Thanks for your writing!
Comment from nancyjam
This is a beautiful poem for Nomi and should comfort him tremendously
knowing that you and others on site are thinking of him.
Each beautifully crafted stanza touches on feelings Nomi may be experiencing and will surely help mend his heart.
Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is a beautiful poem for Nomi and should comfort him tremendously
knowing that you and others on site are thinking of him.
Each beautifully crafted stanza touches on feelings Nomi may be experiencing and will surely help mend his heart.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Nancy fo your review, I appreciate your kind comments, we all hope that Nomi is well supported at this difficult time, love Dolly x
Comment from Paul McFarland
A very nice tribute for Nolan's wife, Christine. Well written by someone who knows the pain of losing a spouse. Those are always poems that I hate to write, but I have written quite a few.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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A very nice tribute for Nolan's wife, Christine. Well written by someone who knows the pain of losing a spouse. Those are always poems that I hate to write, but I have written quite a few.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Paul for your review, much appreciated, love Christine x
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so sweet and relatable. I've not written a condolence post on this site before, not least because it's so difficult to judge how much to say or not say, especially when we haven't actually met in person. Grief, as you express, is individual and we can only speak from our own experience of losing a loved one which may well be very different. But I'm sure it can change priorities as much, for example, as the loss of good health. We grow through pain. Thanks for sharing, Dolly. Love Debbie xx
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is so sweet and relatable. I've not written a condolence post on this site before, not least because it's so difficult to judge how much to say or not say, especially when we haven't actually met in person. Grief, as you express, is individual and we can only speak from our own experience of losing a loved one which may well be very different. But I'm sure it can change priorities as much, for example, as the loss of good health. We grow through pain. Thanks for sharing, Dolly. Love Debbie xx
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie for your review, it is difficult writing this kind of poetry for someone we have never met and don't really know, but we all feel grief albeit in different ways, and it is hard to deal with, so we can empathise, I appreciate your comments, love Dolly x
Comment from GWHARGIS
As you stated, life is all too short and unpredictable. I don't think there is a person on earth who hasn't experienced a loss but each grieves differently. This was a lovely poem that offered friendship in a time of need. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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As you stated, life is all too short and unpredictable. I don't think there is a person on earth who hasn't experienced a loss but each grieves differently. This was a lovely poem that offered friendship in a time of need. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Gretchen for your review, I wrote this poem from the perspective of all who are grieving and as you say we all grieve differently and it is difficult to write a personal poem about someone you have never even met, but I think we all feel deep sorrow when we are grieving even if we don't outwardly show it. Love Dolly x x x
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and I know it should be a comfortableNomi in his grief. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you and keep you safe. Pat.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is beautifully written and I know it should be a comfortableNomi in his grief. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you and keep you safe. Pat.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you Patricia for your review, you have a great day too, love Dolly x