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Comment from BethShelby
I really enjoyed this poem inspired by the Song of Soloman in the Bible. This poem speaks of all of the ways nature has a part in love. The last verse indicated the is for the Creator. Beautifully illustrated as all of your poem are.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem inspired by the Song of Soloman in the Bible. This poem speaks of all of the ways nature has a part in love. The last verse indicated the is for the Creator. Beautifully illustrated as all of your poem are.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Beth
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
To me, this reads about the love for God Who created us "with the gentle hands of love" and taught us to love. He is a God of Love. You express love and passion so well!
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on it's wings (its)
stars and stops for you (starts)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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To me, this reads about the love for God Who created us "with the gentle hands of love" and taught us to love. He is a God of Love. You express love and passion so well!
Suggestions:
on it's wings (its)
stars and stops for you (starts)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ yes, it's about the love I feel for Jesus. Errors fixed, thank you 😊
Msrival ❤️ 😊
Comment from royowen
Of course the Song of Songs, (Solomon) are the love between the Lord and His bride, and is the most passionate of lyrical love that one could possibly imagine, beautifully written dear Gypsy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Of course the Song of Songs, (Solomon) are the love between the Lord and His bride, and is the most passionate of lyrical love that one could possibly imagine, beautifully written dear Gypsy, blessings Roy
Typo star(t)s and stops
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. Errors fixed, thank you.
Gypsy 😊
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Welcome Gypsy,
Comment from Douglas Goff
That is some focused dedicated love. I bet you are a lot of fun to be around.
Anyways, I love the pictures and coloring on this one. I like the wide variety of colors. Very distinct and eye catching.
I appreciate your talented soul, my friend. Really do. It is fun to read your poems.
Douglas
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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That is some focused dedicated love. I bet you are a lot of fun to be around.
Anyways, I love the pictures and coloring on this one. I like the wide variety of colors. Very distinct and eye catching.
I appreciate your talented soul, my friend. Really do. It is fun to read your poems.
Douglas
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem. I love how the day and night control you and transform you into a person who could love fully and perfectly. I really liked that this was so in tune with the world around you. Gretchen
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This was a beautiful poem. I love how the day and night control you and transform you into a person who could love fully and perfectly. I really liked that this was so in tune with the world around you. Gretchen
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
