Victoria
An acrostic23 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Katie,
I like your acrostic poem, describing the virtues of your protagonist, Victoria.
Your photo shows the sophistication of a woman, beautiful on the inside and out.
Excellent acrostic, Katie.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Katie,
I like your acrostic poem, describing the virtues of your protagonist, Victoria.
Your photo shows the sophistication of a woman, beautiful on the inside and out.
Excellent acrostic, Katie.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review Cindy.
Take care
Katiemae1977
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You're welcome, Katie Mae.
Comment from Sue Smith
This is a lovely version of an acrostic. It has a light touch and a natural, easy flow that makes it a delight to read. I was just a little confused by the last line as I wasn't sure what it meant, but that might be my lack of knowledge. Overall it's a very charming and graceful poem
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely version of an acrostic. It has a light touch and a natural, easy flow that makes it a delight to read. I was just a little confused by the last line as I wasn't sure what it meant, but that might be my lack of knowledge. Overall it's a very charming and graceful poem
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Sue for reading and reviewing!
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very cool. I like how the style of this was very classical. I could visualize and feel the spell she could weave with just a look. I really enjoyed your poem. Good luck to you in the contest. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This was very cool. I like how the style of this was very classical. I could visualize and feel the spell she could weave with just a look. I really enjoyed your poem. Good luck to you in the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks Gretchen for stopping by to read and review!
Luv&stuff
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Katie,
This is a good rhyming acrostic about Queen Victoria, I am guessing, because of the style of clothes is the artwork. Though Queen Victoria wouldn't believe in Apollo. Or it could be the Roman Goddess of Victory since Apollo is both a Greek and Roman God. The only god that is in both groups.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Katie,
This is a good rhyming acrostic about Queen Victoria, I am guessing, because of the style of clothes is the artwork. Though Queen Victoria wouldn't believe in Apollo. Or it could be the Roman Goddess of Victory since Apollo is both a Greek and Roman God. The only god that is in both groups.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks Joan. I didn't actually mean Queen Victoria, just Victoria in general but that's OK. She qualities.
Glad you liked the poem.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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You are most welcome, Katie.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You wrote a good acrostic with effective imagery and rhyme.
-There is also a smooth rhythm from line to line.
-You create a vivid word picture, as well.
-I like the lines about the "dew drops" and
comparing them to "blue skies."
-A very good closing couplet.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You wrote a good acrostic with effective imagery and rhyme.
-There is also a smooth rhythm from line to line.
-You create a vivid word picture, as well.
-I like the lines about the "dew drops" and
comparing them to "blue skies."
-A very good closing couplet.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Pam for your wonderful comments and review.
Take care and enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Luv&Stuff
Katiemae1977
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You are very welcome, Katiemae. You have a good weekend, too.
Comment from nancyjam
This is a lovely Acrostic entry. I love the romantic aura of the piece.
great rhyme as well. I'm sure you will do well in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely Acrostic entry. I love the romantic aura of the piece.
great rhyme as well. I'm sure you will do well in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very good Nancy for your lovely comments and review.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment from Nicki.B
This is beautiful. I really enjoyed your acrostic poem, I love the romance it holds. It's got a lovely image and font and presentation to ad to drama. Well done a perfect entry, best of luck!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is beautiful. I really enjoyed your acrostic poem, I love the romance it holds. It's got a lovely image and font and presentation to ad to drama. Well done a perfect entry, best of luck!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you Nicki for your lovely comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment from mermaids
You have such a smooth flow of words and a light feel to your poem. "Observe the dew drops in her eyes" is a wonderful line that has a magical feel to it. I also like the mention of Apollo. Excellent acrostic form.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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You have such a smooth flow of words and a light feel to your poem. "Observe the dew drops in her eyes" is a wonderful line that has a magical feel to it. I also like the mention of Apollo. Excellent acrostic form.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much mermaids for your lovely comments and review.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a very nice poem. The words are descriptive. The picture is a good choice for the poem. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is a very nice poem. The words are descriptive. The picture is a good choice for the poem. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Brenda!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment from nomi338
As a young man I once answered the seductive invitation of an older woman. I was never the same afterwards. That woman did things to me and made me do things to her that I had never done before. I was an adult in my twenties and already a veteran of the military who had served overseas. But in her hands I was as new and as inexperienced as a newborn babe. Since that time, I have run away from older, experienced women, even though I am now and older, experienced man.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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As a young man I once answered the seductive invitation of an older woman. I was never the same afterwards. That woman did things to me and made me do things to her that I had never done before. I was an adult in my twenties and already a veteran of the military who had served overseas. But in her hands I was as new and as inexperienced as a newborn babe. Since that time, I have run away from older, experienced women, even though I am now and older, experienced man.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for sharing nomi338.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
