In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "To Nomi"Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
24 total reviews
Comment from estory
I thought this was a perfect sympathy piece for Nomi. I hadn't heard is wife died; I think I reviewed one of his pieces not that long ago. But this haiku type piece had perfect balance, the nature image, and the epiphany moment to make a perfect haiku. I thought the flower image great for capturing that sense of the cycle of season and life, and the fragrance that drifts into eternity has elements of the persistence of memory and hope in the life to come. Nice job with this one. estory
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I thought this was a perfect sympathy piece for Nomi. I hadn't heard is wife died; I think I reviewed one of his pieces not that long ago. But this haiku type piece had perfect balance, the nature image, and the epiphany moment to make a perfect haiku. I thought the flower image great for capturing that sense of the cycle of season and life, and the fragrance that drifts into eternity has elements of the persistence of memory and hope in the life to come. Nice job with this one. estory
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Oh, estory, thank you so much, for the wonderful review and stars. I'm so glad it resonated with you. Haibun poetry is one of my favourite ones. My thoughts are with Nomi. Thanks again, Ulla:)))
Comment from royowen
For those of us that have marriage partners would dread the thought that their spouses would be gone before them, but when one has that hope within them it's merely a transitional happening, the wonderful things like family is a sharing of being proud parents and grand parents. Beautifully written Ulla, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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For those of us that have marriage partners would dread the thought that their spouses would be gone before them, but when one has that hope within them it's merely a transitional happening, the wonderful things like family is a sharing of being proud parents and grand parents. Beautifully written Ulla, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy. I totally agree with you. Ulla:)))
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Bless you
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ulla, what a beautiful tribute to Nolan
for the loss of his wife...Yvonne...
my prayers go out to him and his family
and friends...she is now at peace...she
is now how...
I love your beautiful poem sweet girl...so
very nicely written...and I love your picture...
love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Hi Ulla, what a beautiful tribute to Nolan
for the loss of his wife...Yvonne...
my prayers go out to him and his family
and friends...she is now at peace...she
is now how...
I love your beautiful poem sweet girl...so
very nicely written...and I love your picture...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Linda, and for your wonderful words. I hope he'll find solace in some of our words. Thanks again, my dear friend, Ulla xxx
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you are so very welcome sweet girl...
I will keep him in my prayers...
and all his FanStory friends will help
him get through these hard times...
we are a family of love and caring...
so good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo 🙏❤️🤗🌼
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful Haibun for Nomi's wife. The yellow tulip is such a great metaphor for Nomi's wonderful wife in heaven. You inspire me to write one, too.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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What a beautiful Haibun for Nomi's wife. The yellow tulip is such a great metaphor for Nomi's wonderful wife in heaven. You inspire me to write one, too.
Excellent.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Lisa, what can I say. Thank you so very much for this wonderful review and for the beautiful stars. I hope you will write one. It's bone of my favourite poetic forms. A hug, Ulla xcx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation, Ulla.
-You wrote a very good poem for nomi.
-I like your haibun that shows the impact
the news of his wife made on you, as well as
thinking about him and how he must be feeling.
-A beautiful poem, too.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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-Lovely image and nice presentation, Ulla.
-You wrote a very good poem for nomi.
-I like your haibun that shows the impact
the news of his wife made on you, as well as
thinking about him and how he must be feeling.
-A beautiful poem, too.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam. I'm so glad you liked my haibun. I just feel so sorry for Nolan and his great loss. Thanks again, Ulla xcx
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You are very welcome, Ulla. I feel the same way. Did you read the poem he posted?
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No I didn't see it I will find a read it. X
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I'm glad.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Ulla, what a lovely poem of your feelings about Nomi's loss. As friends we all have our own special feelings about each other and you told yours so beautifully in this lovely poem. I can almost see you sitting on your terrace as you thought about a friend and someone who you care about in this wonderful second family. You have me crying again now. So thank you for writing this and adding to the book, thank you for being here and for being you. The best kind of friend there is.
Love, Debi
Virtual six!!!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Oh Ulla, what a lovely poem of your feelings about Nomi's loss. As friends we all have our own special feelings about each other and you told yours so beautifully in this lovely poem. I can almost see you sitting on your terrace as you thought about a friend and someone who you care about in this wonderful second family. You have me crying again now. So thank you for writing this and adding to the book, thank you for being here and for being you. The best kind of friend there is.
Love, Debi
Virtual six!!!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Debi. The words and feelings were just there for our friend, Nolan in his profound loss. Love, Ulla xx
Comment from RJ Heritage
A beautiful tribute to a dear one who has passed in death. Such tender words of endearing gives comfort to grieving hearts.
Be strengthened in your belief.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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A beautiful tribute to a dear one who has passed in death. Such tender words of endearing gives comfort to grieving hearts.
Be strengthened in your belief.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, RJ. I'm so glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful way to convey your condolences with your deeply sympathetic words of your well crafted haibun.
Thank you for joining us, Ulla, in showing our support of our dear Nomi.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Beautiful way to convey your condolences with your deeply sympathetic words of your well crafted haibun.
Thank you for joining us, Ulla, in showing our support of our dear Nomi.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen, I'm so glad you liked it. Ulla xcx
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, Ulla, this simple and beautiful for our dear Nomi. I'm sure he will love it. Thank you for this lovely addition to the book. A haibun, I believe.
Dear Nomi, again, my sincere condolences in your great loss. I trust the Lord is circling you with His comfort.
Bless you, my friend.
Sal Xoxo's
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Oh, Ulla, this simple and beautiful for our dear Nomi. I'm sure he will love it. Thank you for this lovely addition to the book. A haibun, I believe.
Dear Nomi, again, my sincere condolences in your great loss. I trust the Lord is circling you with His comfort.
Bless you, my friend.
Sal Xoxo's
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Sally, Ulla xxx
Comment from karenina
A haibun! What an elegant way to express your condolences to Nomi! I think you and I posted at the same time as we are both "chapter 4" now! (I don't know if Tom can fix that)--
This is beautifully written Ulla. I know he will take comfort here...
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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A haibun! What an elegant way to express your condolences to Nomi! I think you and I posted at the same time as we are both "chapter 4" now! (I don't know if Tom can fix that)--
This is beautifully written Ulla. I know he will take comfort here...
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Karenina. I hope Tom has sorted it out. That is not on the fore of my mind. Lol. Ulla xxx
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Not an issue. He said I could edit my chapter number so I think I'm at chapter eleven. Who knew it would be that easy?