Tears From the Sky
Variations of tears from Mother Natures POV13 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Welcome, Devon.
This is a good start. It shows the hope rain brings after a long drought and it shows how dependent we are on the fickle weather. It does have some rhyme but not a predictable rhyme scheme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good day.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Welcome, Devon.
This is a good start. It shows the hope rain brings after a long drought and it shows how dependent we are on the fickle weather. It does have some rhyme but not a predictable rhyme scheme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I appreciate the warm welcome. I definitely wanted my first poem to start my journey off in the right direction. Thank you.
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We are here to help and encourage. You're welcome, DeVon.
Joan
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought your poem beautifully captured the anticipation and the need for rain. The way you personify the clouds, holding onto their moisture yet refusing to release it, was fantastic. I love the way you explore the different possibilities of what the rain might bring. The poem was well written. The poem flows so easily. Great job!
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought your poem beautifully captured the anticipation and the need for rain. The way you personify the clouds, holding onto their moisture yet refusing to release it, was fantastic. I love the way you explore the different possibilities of what the rain might bring. The poem was well written. The poem flows so easily. Great job!
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you. I am so glad that you found my poem to be well written. I try my best to show emotion through my words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Tears from the Sky, pulls me towards a scene which presents rain as an inconstant event which may speak to where we are in the world, or when we are.
Welcome to Fanstory, DeVon.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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This poem, Tears from the Sky, pulls me towards a scene which presents rain as an inconstant event which may speak to where we are in the world, or when we are.
Welcome to Fanstory, DeVon.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate the feedback
