Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

When I first started reading this, I felt the love, but as the poem progressed, a more sinister side appeared. What a clever poem. 'He beholds the candles of my life.' This is such a beautiful line full of emotion.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Sometimes the light in someone's eyes is enough to ignite our heart with love and I enjoyed your warm and inviting words here Sarah, an ambient post full of love and kindness, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

thanks Dolly, your reviews are very much appreciated, and thanks again for all your messages of support, blessings, Sarah x

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

Congratulations on your milestone post! Your poem is well written. Love is sometimes heartbreaking and tragic; your poem plays upon the reader's heartstrings. Best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

Dear Evi,
Many thanks for your review, it is really much appreciated and means so much to me,
God bless You,
Sarah

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Congratulations on post number 50, Sarah and you've celebrated with a well written poem about the troubles that can arise between couples in love when others get involved,
hissing like snakes.
Well done, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

thanks a million for your congratulations, and encouraging review,
warm regards,
Sarah

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Another beautifully written poem that lights up the windows of the soul to penetrate to corners of the mind, heart and stir the reflections of the most tender thoughts on the mind, well done blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024

thanks a million, bless You. Sarah

reply by royowen on 05-Oct-2024

my pleasure

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Congratulations, Sarah for posting your 50th piece on FanStory. I hope you are enjoying your time here and are not only sharing your efforts but enjoying others as well. thank you for sharing your sonnet.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 03-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024

Thanks a million Carol, for your awesome review, and congratulations, yes i also rate other poems, from times to times: fanstory is a beautiful community ;) take care x

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Tragic, seems to speak to the ever-prying power of the world, others, or other invisible forces to separate a couple from what they see as their future together.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024

yes you nailed the meaning behind the lines, and through the words of my poems: jealousy and envy obstruct true love and the consequences can be devastating, when lives depend on the love fuelling them, many thanks for your review. take care ;)