Spirited Justice
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Even though there has been lots of action and suspicious clues, we are no closer to knowing who committed the murders than we were a few chapters ago. You keep the suspense going. This is why you're the number one novelist, and why I keep reading.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Even though there has been lots of action and suspicious clues, we are no closer to knowing who committed the murders than we were a few chapters ago. You keep the suspense going. This is why you're the number one novelist, and why I keep reading.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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there have been a few descreet clues but not blaring ones...soon you will get some information and begin to realize where we are headed. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I do hope that Donatelli goes to the ranch and makes up with Garth, that would be really nice. More if Danatelli gives up the booze! That is a mystery regarding the scalpel and Bennett. So many questions, but no answers. This was another amazing chapter, my clever friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I do hope that Donatelli goes to the ranch and makes up with Garth, that would be really nice. More if Danatelli gives up the booze! That is a mystery regarding the scalpel and Bennett. So many questions, but no answers. This was another amazing chapter, my clever friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Now that Jose has made a "clean get-away" (that's my car wash joke for the day) and Donatelli might be about to sign a peace treaty with Garth we just might get somewhere.... Though that key and safe deposit box are still out there. Thanks as always for the marvelous review and the stars. You are the best!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
It seems like Donatelli could use some help on this case. He's letting past history get in his way, apparently. Just wondering how he's so sure Naomi is not guilty. Perhaps he knows more than he's letting on? OK, I'm getting too involved in this case! LOL. Good story. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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It seems like Donatelli could use some help on this case. He's letting past history get in his way, apparently. Just wondering how he's so sure Naomi is not guilty. Perhaps he knows more than he's letting on? OK, I'm getting too involved in this case! LOL. Good story. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Never too involved! That's the reaction I hope for... when a whodunit gets under your skin and you want to solve it before the writer.. How awesome is that? Eleanor will work her magic (I hope) and Garth and Donatelli will get down to solving these crimes. Thanks so much, Carol.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You've been busy writing. I think I still have one more chapter to read and review. Later today,,, it's time to get ready for church.
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I'm going to brunch with my children this morning...Wonders will never cease! Have a wonderful day.
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I hope you had a great brunch with your children. Great way to start your day, I hope.
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the conversation between Garth and Matthew, particularly when Garth mentioned about his coffee, this did an excellent job of adding some humour to the scene and I could really see Garth's personality coming through in his dialogue. Another excellent piece, Carol, I'm excited for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I loved the conversation between Garth and Matthew, particularly when Garth mentioned about his coffee, this did an excellent job of adding some humour to the scene and I could really see Garth's personality coming through in his dialogue. Another excellent piece, Carol, I'm excited for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Jacob. I am thrilled that you can understand the different characters and how their personalities affect the storyline. I appreciate your time and review.
Smiles, Carol