haiku (emerald to gold)
a 5-7-521 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery.
-Good use of colors in line one.
-A good second line about change
from one thing to another.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery.
-Good use of colors in line one.
-A good second line about change
from one thing to another.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from Begin Again
A beautiful reminder of what will soon be upon us..the brilliant colors of autumn leaves... You certainly painted the picture bright with your sparkling colors of emerald and gold. Matches the photo well.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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A beautiful reminder of what will soon be upon us..the brilliant colors of autumn leaves... You certainly painted the picture bright with your sparkling colors of emerald and gold. Matches the photo well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
The eternal cycle of change, and I like how you intertwined the seasons with the history aspect, both human history and natural history. Great image and a nice original thought. Well presented. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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The eternal cycle of change, and I like how you intertwined the seasons with the history aspect, both human history and natural history. Great image and a nice original thought. Well presented. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Wendy
Comment from gansach
A beautiful presentation for the Haiku competition. The colors are popping and certainly show off a lovely fall landscape. And your poem decribes the scene perfectly. Good show!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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A beautiful presentation for the Haiku competition. The colors are popping and certainly show off a lovely fall landscape. And your poem decribes the scene perfectly. Good show!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Gail
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the colourful walk through the seasons here Bill, your descriptions need no picture here, a fine Haiku for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed the colourful walk through the seasons here Bill, your descriptions need no picture here, a fine Haiku for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! And those "kingdoms" could be human, animal, or plant. The seasons have their cycles and everything has to follow. I like how you used gems in the first line for the leaf changes. I wonder if you changed that first like because the title haiku (here it is again) could be:
haiku (emerald to gold) but you may be intentionally avoiding that title convention.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I like it! And those "kingdoms" could be human, animal, or plant. The seasons have their cycles and everything has to follow. I like how you used gems in the first line for the leaf changes. I wonder if you changed that first like because the title haiku (here it is again) could be:
haiku (emerald to gold) but you may be intentionally avoiding that title convention.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I changed it. I do so few actual haiku.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written haiku. It has a nice overall presentation. Very beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This is a beautifully written haiku. It has a nice overall presentation. Very beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Joanne.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful picture. I like the words you used: emerald to gold. The poem is written well. Good luck in the contest. Kingdoms fall and rise again is surely true.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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What a beautiful picture. I like the words you used: emerald to gold. The poem is written well. Good luck in the contest. Kingdoms fall and rise again is surely true.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Brenda
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love this one. I always base a "true haiku" on whether or not it imbues me with a sense of peace, and this beauty of yours absolutely did. I love Autumn, and you have captured its essence here, both with your words as well as this oh-so gorgeous artwork. Well done! xoxo
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I love this one. I always base a "true haiku" on whether or not it imbues me with a sense of peace, and this beauty of yours absolutely did. I love Autumn, and you have captured its essence here, both with your words as well as this oh-so gorgeous artwork. Well done! xoxo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle
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My pleasure! xo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
My favorite time of the year but it always passes way too fast! Pumpkin spice latte's, drives thru the foliage, backyard fire pits, and Halloween! Beautiful poem that has me excited for it all.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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My favorite time of the year but it always passes way too fast! Pumpkin spice latte's, drives thru the foliage, backyard fire pits, and Halloween! Beautiful poem that has me excited for it all.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Me too.