Surprising Thanksgiving
A true story about Thanksgiving.12 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderful story! The Thanksgiving turkey mishap is so funny. The way you describe the tension and relief when your younger sister confessed was so real. It's a wonderful a family moment. Thanks for sharing this delightful and amusing memory!
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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What a wonderful story! The Thanksgiving turkey mishap is so funny. The way you describe the tension and relief when your younger sister confessed was so real. It's a wonderful a family moment. Thanks for sharing this delightful and amusing memory!
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the great review!
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a well written true story, which I find are usually the best type of stories. You expressed the narrative very well and created strong imagery. Your last sentence about your younger sister, seems to be separated a bit far from the rest of your story. I wish that I had a six star for this story, but I have ran out.
Great story.
RJ
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This is a well written true story, which I find are usually the best type of stories. You expressed the narrative very well and created strong imagery. Your last sentence about your younger sister, seems to be separated a bit far from the rest of your story. I wish that I had a six star for this story, but I have ran out.
Great story.
RJ
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
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Mu pleasure
RJ