2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from shelley kaye
wait... you can shake hot chocolate?? never heard that before - always just stir it...
i took the 'stars tremble in blue' as the stars shaking in sadness... but that could be just me
anyway, very cool five senses poem - they are written about well
love the mix of jasmine and hot chocolate
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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wait... you can shake hot chocolate?? never heard that before - always just stir it...
i took the 'stars tremble in blue' as the stars shaking in sadness... but that could be just me
anyway, very cool five senses poem - they are written about well
love the mix of jasmine and hot chocolate
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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In the top picture, the phrase, "Shaken, not stirred" is inspired by a fictional character, Agent 007 James Bond's famous phrase. It's the way he prefers his martini cocktail. Only older people will know who Bond is.
Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a comforting poem. I loved the line stars tremble in blue. I got the feeling that the stars trembled in excitement and anticipation about being wished upon. Such a magical and cozy poem. Gretchen
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This was such a comforting poem. I loved the line stars tremble in blue. I got the feeling that the stars trembled in excitement and anticipation about being wished upon. Such a magical and cozy poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a beautiful piece about how important family is, and how their spirits can linger with us long after they have sadly passed. An excellent piece of writing, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This is a beautiful piece about how important family is, and how their spirits can linger with us long after they have sadly passed. An excellent piece of writing, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Love your nostalgic poem, MariVal. And what a treat to have before bed. Although I think the chocolate would make me hyper but maybe the carbs of the churros would make me sleepy. You always know how to bring in all the senses in your poems.
Suggestion:
jasmin imbued breeze (jasmine-imbued)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Love your nostalgic poem, MariVal. And what a treat to have before bed. Although I think the chocolate would make me hyper but maybe the carbs of the churros would make me sleepy. You always know how to bring in all the senses in your poems.
Suggestion:
jasmin imbued breeze (jasmine-imbued)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. I fixed it. I appreciate your kind and helpful review. Have a wonderful weekend. Take it easy.
MariVal ❤️
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such occasions tingle our senses as we enjoy the warmth of love and the comfort of family, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here, a magical post, love Dolly x x x
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Such occasions tingle our senses as we enjoy the warmth of love and the comfort of family, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here, a magical post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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You too x x x
Comment from pome lover
a lovely use of the five senses, thinking about your mother and grandmother - happy thoughts, and hot cocoa before you go to sleep.
You can't beat that.
So, you created the sign, too? or rather, it looks like a chalkboard. Very nice!
Katharine
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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a lovely use of the five senses, thinking about your mother and grandmother - happy thoughts, and hot cocoa before you go to sleep.
You can't beat that.
So, you created the sign, too? or rather, it looks like a chalkboard. Very nice!
Katharine
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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you're welcome.
and you, too.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Stars Tremble in Blue, takes the readers r=through a memorable evening from youth that included lovely lighting and important scents of family.
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This poem, Stars Tremble in Blue, takes the readers r=through a memorable evening from youth that included lovely lighting and important scents of family.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from gansach
This is a lovely sensory poem evoking favorite childhood memories~wishing on stars, hearing musical winds blow, smelling flower breezes and yummy treats, tasting that bedtime snack, and feeling the coziness of being tucked in by loving hands. Great presentation! Well done!
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This is a lovely sensory poem evoking favorite childhood memories~wishing on stars, hearing musical winds blow, smelling flower breezes and yummy treats, tasting that bedtime snack, and feeling the coziness of being tucked in by loving hands. Great presentation! Well done!
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊