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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very sultry and passion filled poem. The ethereal feel of the thing was very cool. I liked how the mood was set by the descriptive lines. Undress me with your blue starry eyes. I pictured the night sky. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This was a very sultry and passion filled poem. The ethereal feel of the thing was very cool. I liked how the mood was set by the descriptive lines. Undress me with your blue starry eyes. I pictured the night sky. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There's quite some energy and momentum going on here as the verse evolves, conveying passion and a sense of eternity. Thank you for sharing this evocative and lovely post. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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There's quite some energy and momentum going on here as the verse evolves, conveying passion and a sense of eternity. Thank you for sharing this evocative and lovely post. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
embraced me at night -- did you mean "embrace"? (no 'd')
other than that, a great sweet senryu suite with totally cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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embraced me at night -- did you mean "embrace"? (no 'd')
other than that, a great sweet senryu suite with totally cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Fixed! Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Ohhh I love this Gypsy. This is really spectacular.
Very erotic and descriptive.
Just a thought...
I feel your touch
day and night
by land or by sea
Just evoking the old 1 if by land 2 if by sea...
Either way it's awesome
Beautiful write
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Ohhh I love this Gypsy. This is really spectacular.
Very erotic and descriptive.
Just a thought...
I feel your touch
day and night
by land or by sea
Just evoking the old 1 if by land 2 if by sea...
Either way it's awesome
Beautiful write
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you! I fixed it.
Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a beautiful poem, Its such a magical style of writing. One than I've not ventured into as I don't think I'd be very good at it.
As always along with the perfectly chosen words the imagery and colour and presentation it all fits together perfectly.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is a beautiful poem, Its such a magical style of writing. One than I've not ventured into as I don't think I'd be very good at it.
As always along with the perfectly chosen words the imagery and colour and presentation it all fits together perfectly.
Well done!
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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The form is easy to write, basically a poem in five lines, no rhymes
Thank you very much, Nicki
Gypsy 😊