Fast Food
A Teikei-Shi Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Samantha Wymer
What a adorable and humorous poem! Even the picture is so cute of the baby running with the rice. Each word is strong and rhythms beautifully together. Run little baby run. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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What a adorable and humorous poem! Even the picture is so cute of the baby running with the rice. Each word is strong and rhythms beautifully together. Run little baby run. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hahaha. Yes, on those little chubby legs! Thanks, Samantha. xo
Comment from GWHARGIS
The picture made me laugh, but your poem made me howl. It's tough getting away with food fast enough, unless you have a plan of battle. This was so funny. I got a good laugh. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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The picture made me laugh, but your poem made me howl. It's tough getting away with food fast enough, unless you have a plan of battle. This was so funny. I got a good laugh. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen. I think Gypsy outdid herself this week with her picture choice. I appreciate this fun review. xoxo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehe.... so true. Great Teikei-shi for the japanese poetry club. I love the presentation and word imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Hehe.... so true. Great Teikei-shi for the japanese poetry club. I love the presentation and word imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Well done!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Professor! I'm glad I met your assignment with aplomb and panache! xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This telkei-shi, Fast Food, has the proper formatting and imagines that a little beach ball like this could possibly be faster than a crazy rice lady. That kid needs a salad.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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This telkei-shi, Fast Food, has the proper formatting and imagines that a little beach ball like this could possibly be faster than a crazy rice lady. That kid needs a salad.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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And not macaroni salad, either!! A couple other reviewers referred to him as a sumo wrestler. Your "beach ball" is quite descriptive, too! Thanks for the review. xo
Comment from BethShelby
I like your Teikei-shi Japanese poem. The picture is funny. The kid looks like a baby sumo wrestler. From the looks of him, it's probably not the first bowl of rice he's stolen.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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I like your Teikei-shi Japanese poem. The picture is funny. The kid looks like a baby sumo wrestler. From the looks of him, it's probably not the first bowl of rice he's stolen.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, our facilitator, provided this along with the assignment, and I thought it was adorable! Thanks for the fun review. xoxo
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I read Gypsies. Her's didn't rhyme and I thought she used a different form of Japanese poetry.
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I read Gypsies. Her's didn't rhyme and I thought she used a different form of Japanese poetry.
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Yes. I don't think hers was supposed to be part of the club assignment. I think she just liked the picture.