Along the Road
A spiritual poem14 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem beautifully captures the emotional journey from despair to hope. The imagery of the shadowed street and sunless path sets a vivid, somber scene, effectively conveying the feeling of hopelessness. The transition from the cold, dark imagery to the warmth and light provided by "He" creates a powerful contrast that underscores the theme of finding strength and support in times of difficulty. The use of rhyme and rhythm is smooth and consistent, enhancing the overall flow and impact of the poem. The closing lines, which reveal the constant presence and support of "He," offer a comforting and uplifting resolution. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that resonates with its message of enduring faith and support.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
This poem beautifully captures the emotional journey from despair to hope. The imagery of the shadowed street and sunless path sets a vivid, somber scene, effectively conveying the feeling of hopelessness. The transition from the cold, dark imagery to the warmth and light provided by "He" creates a powerful contrast that underscores the theme of finding strength and support in times of difficulty. The use of rhyme and rhythm is smooth and consistent, enhancing the overall flow and impact of the poem. The closing lines, which reveal the constant presence and support of "He," offer a comforting and uplifting resolution. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that resonates with its message of enduring faith and support.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Patty, your insightful review means so much to me. Thank you!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely, poignant poem for the spiritual poem contest. Lovely rhyming throughout this story as you take us through an emotional journey before finding, you were never alone. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
This is a lovely, poignant poem for the spiritual poem contest. Lovely rhyming throughout this story as you take us through an emotional journey before finding, you were never alone. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed reading your poem. For me it's a heartfelt piece that shares the theme of finding support in moments of hardship. The repeated reassurance of never walking alone is a comforting message. Well done.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
I really enjoyed reading your poem. For me it's a heartfelt piece that shares the theme of finding support in moments of hardship. The repeated reassurance of never walking alone is a comforting message. Well done.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael!
Comment from Jacob1395
I really liked how you conveyed in your writing how difficult it can sometimes be to keep faith, but how the Lord always lifts you up when you are struggling. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
I really liked how you conveyed in your writing how difficult it can sometimes be to keep faith, but how the Lord always lifts you up when you are struggling. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jacob! Truly appreciate it! Xo