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Another Wild Night

Youth getting wild.

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Comment from gansach
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This poem has a very nice presentation, the photo is a good illustration. Once again, you have a variety of rhyme schemes and stanza constructions that can be confusing to the reader, but somehow it manages to work together to produce the desired effect. It's evident you love to write and have an innate talent for it even in its unpolished state. Nice work! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
    LOl! Well, thank you gansach. I appreciate your review!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This poem with short lines and end rhymes portrays a young man whose head is full of a little too much of everything, but he is also wrapped up in the attention of an attractive girl. I like the understatement at the end.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
    LOL! Well, thank you Crystie. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Another Wild Night, examines the mind of the intoxicated young man who is realizing that the night has overcome him, but it is yet to end well with the girl.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
    Yes, Bill. You are so right Lol! Thank you for your review!
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed your poem about a Saturday night. I liked your rhymes and varying rhyme scheme, as well. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Well, thank you Jessi. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I'm sure this poem/song took many on FS back to their wild days in the 60s and 70s. It was a wild time and a fun time. I enjoyed reading this Harry, it was a good fun poem. Well done, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Well, thank you Sandra. I actually wrote this in the late 70's during Disco and just recently presented it. Thank you for your insight and review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Janet Foor
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"Another wild Night" tells quite a story in a lyrical fashion that when read aloud sounds like it could be out to music.
Good job with this fun poem Harry.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    LOL! Well, thank you Janet. I wrote this in the late 70's during Disco. So, I guess it could be a song!
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem reads like a song. And it brings to mind lyrics of Jimmy Buffet. I wonder who the "she" is whether it's someone he came to the bar with or the waitress. Hope that the next day clears things up for them both!

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    LOL! Well, thank you Lyenochka. I actually wrote this during the 70's during Disco. So, I guess it could be a song.
Comment from godlucifer
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nothing like a party on a saturday night. the wild,the craziest,and the youthful feeling on a saturday night. your poem was truly written from your heart. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Yes, it was written for the youth. Thanks again, godlucifer for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from mermaids
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There is a party feeling in your words. I enjoyed reading your poem, it is like having a good time. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow with an almost musical feel to it.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    Well, thank you mermaids! I wrote this during the 70's during Disco. So, I just recently presented it. I guess it could be a song. Thank you for your review!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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Sounds like a great party. I almost feel like I am there myself putting a few beers back nd listening to the music play. You did a great job. It had a slow but steady pace and near the end I swear I I felt like I had a buzz.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    LOL! Well, I think we have all been there at least once. Thank you!