Spirited Justice
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Comment from royowen
Poor Naomi, I thought Eleanor or Danni might have saved her, but no, perhaps they still might, her fear was well founded, why didn't she have some method of defence, knowing she was probably a target. Beautifully written, the fear of Naomi was palpable, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Poor Naomi, I thought Eleanor or Danni might have saved her, but no, perhaps they still might, her fear was well founded, why didn't she have some method of defence, knowing she was probably a target. Beautifully written, the fear of Naomi was palpable, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Eleanor and Danni were tied up with Hilda and Naomi didn't realize how much trouble she was in until she started searching Arthur's room. A day late and a dollar short as they say. Hopefully someone can come to her rescue before it's too late.
Smiles, Carol
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Yep
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see who entered the apartment. I am hoping it's Matthew or maybe Eleanor. It has to be a good person. Love the story.
I went back to make sure I hadn't missed any chapters.
" She laughed, "Sorry, I guess I watch too many mystery movies." (laughed.)
As the taxi pulled from the curb, she remained unaware of the black sedan parked just a few feet away. The man from the memorial slipped inside, the car's engine purring to life as it fell in behind the taxi, following Naomi into the night. (you're in Naomi's POV you said she doesn't know this, so we shouldn't either.)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I can't wait to see who entered the apartment. I am hoping it's Matthew or maybe Eleanor. It has to be a good person. Love the story.
I went back to make sure I hadn't missed any chapters.
" She laughed, "Sorry, I guess I watch too many mystery movies." (laughed.)
As the taxi pulled from the curb, she remained unaware of the black sedan parked just a few feet away. The man from the memorial slipped inside, the car's engine purring to life as it fell in behind the taxi, following Naomi into the night. (you're in Naomi's POV you said she doesn't know this, so we shouldn't either.)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Fixed!
You might be surprised about who is coming, and the person definitely doesn't want to come head to head with Jose. It's starting to ramp up now so I think the tension is building. And when the tension gets high... reinforcements might need to be called in. LOL
smiles, Carol
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Like Garth????
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One never can tell, except Donatelli will freak out if Garth shows up. Two ghosts and the Cowboy!!
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Matthew needs to be shaken a little. LOL
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I hope the door they heard opening and the footsteps are coming Naom's way, she can't die!! Jose needs a knife stuck through his neck! This is all going wrong, she has to fight this and live. Another amazing chapter, Carol! I'm going to start writing again. Bk 2 in The Descendant series. Reading your books has me fired up again, but I won't be writing as fast as you! LOL Well done, my friend. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I hope the door they heard opening and the footsteps are coming Naom's way, she can't die!! Jose needs a knife stuck through his neck! This is all going wrong, she has to fight this and live. Another amazing chapter, Carol! I'm going to start writing again. Bk 2 in The Descendant series. Reading your books has me fired up again, but I won't be writing as fast as you! LOL Well done, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Awesome, Sandra! I loved the first one so I am sitting on pins and needles waiting for another. Your style of writing outshine me. I am thriled that you enjoyed this one though. I had to bring a bit of the evilness into the picture. The footsteps ar coming to her rescue, but I can't promise it will all be okay.... thank you as always for your encouragement and support. I love you for always being there for me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your cliffhangers always leave me anxious to get back to what's about to happen next. I'd call you the cliffhanger Queen when it comes to stirring anticipation. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Your cliffhangers always leave me anxious to get back to what's about to happen next. I'd call you the cliffhanger Queen when it comes to stirring anticipation. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thanks you so much, dear friend. I couldn't ask for a better name... I am honored to be the Cliffhanger Queen. Just gotta keep them coming back for more. Hope you are doing well! When's your next story going to greet us with it's suspense?
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You know I don't write often, and if I have stories like yours to read, why would I. I'm a much better reader than writer. :-) Smiles and hugs back at ya, Ric
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You flatter me and I blush! But it's a great feeling!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Your self-effacing modesty for such a virtuosic talent, make your posts all the better. :-)
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Thank you for making me smile!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Dang! Let me get my blood pressure under control! That was an intense chapter, Carol! You had me holding my breath a time or two. Hope Naomi hangs on until the next chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Dang! Let me get my blood pressure under control! That was an intense chapter, Carol! You had me holding my breath a time or two. Hope Naomi hangs on until the next chapter. :-)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Exactly what I was hoping for, Marilyn! Not a heart attack or anything, but feeling the tension in the chapter. I appreciate the review and your comments. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
No! I really hope Naomi is going to be OK, although something tells me that it might not be. This was another tense chapter, I especially thought this when Naomi found the note telling her to run. I'm really intrigued to find out what business Arthur was involved in and why Jose would want to murder Naomi. Another excellent chapter, I really enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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No! I really hope Naomi is going to be OK, although something tells me that it might not be. This was another tense chapter, I especially thought this when Naomi found the note telling her to run. I'm really intrigued to find out what business Arthur was involved in and why Jose would want to murder Naomi. Another excellent chapter, I really enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much, Jacob! I am glad I could keep you guessing and make you feel the suspense. Thanks for the awesome review and comments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
O.k., Carol that does it! I am embarrassed. You have to go pro NOW! Publish, publish, publish! This is great writing. I wish I could write like this. I really do see how you put a lot of character into your characters! You need to do a book! Best wishes and great story!
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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O.k., Carol that does it! I am embarrassed. You have to go pro NOW! Publish, publish, publish! This is great writing. I wish I could write like this. I really do see how you put a lot of character into your characters! You need to do a book! Best wishes and great story!
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Harry! I must admit I am working on the last book I wrote "Unfinished Brushstrokes." That's another one I think you would have enjoyed. Thank you so much for all your praise and enjoyment with this one. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
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You are so welcome Carol! Good Luck!
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Thank you. Have a great day!
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You too Carol. Best wishes.
