Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Angelo is in trouble. Hilda is in trouble. And boy, you really made the Johan character to be a real creep. I hope Donatelli and his ghost assistants can make it there on time! I liked how you added humor to lighten the situations.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

I love having the ghosts bantering to add a little lightness to the story as we move through the crime and mystery. Poor Danatelli takes the brunt of it. Thanks for reading and commenting as always.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Apparently Hilda doesn't realize yet she as be kidnapped. Maybe she will be rescued since they have her addresss. Another interesting and well-written chapter.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

Hilda has led a sheltered life as a woman deep in research and simple is experiencing a new vibe...not knowing everyone isn't as they seem. Cross your fingers!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I hope they arrive before something happens to Hattie. I do really like this story. So many different things going on. It'll be interesting to see how they all tie together.

As they sat down for breakfast, the small kitchen filled with the aroma of (you can omit 'down' it's not needed)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

I think Eleanor and Danni are on the hunt for Johan and Hilda with Donatelli bringing up the rear. Eleanor might find another clue too.
thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

ohhh that Johan is a sneak and a tease and I don't like him at all. lol I'm not sure Hilda will be able to ignore his advances and that would be very bad. Great chapter.

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

I don't like Johan either...and he's about to believe he's in control of the situation...until Eleanor and Danni get wind of it.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I really liked the sense of urgency there was in your dialogue between your characters, which, for me, really helps to move the story along. I thought the way how you ended your chapter really made me want to read on and I really hope that they find Hilda. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024

Thanks so much, Jacob. I have been enjoying your story with all its mystery so I am thrilled to know that my holds your interest as well. Thank you for following and for enjoying.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

Eleanor needs to get cracking if she's going to stop whatever Johan is doing. Hilda is so innocent, she can't see through this man's flattery. I hope she doesn't reveal where her notes are kept, that would be disastrous, because after that, he wouldn't need her any more. And it looks like Angelo needs to find out where Jose is and see if he can safe him from those two big brutes. Time is moving on, fast, for all of them!! Well done, my friend. I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next chapter, I'm used to yours coming daily! Lol. Love and hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024

Thank you so much, Sandra. I got behind because Tim's Mom is having some horrible health issues with seizures, a birthday party was planned for my granddaughter, and of course, you know who got called. The party couldn't be cancellled so it's two hours at a trampoline place with a Harry Potter Theme.... I am making Snakes as sub sandwiches, magic wands out of pretzel rods, chocolate chip cookies with spiders on top, and broomsticks from reeses. And of course, footing the bill.

I want to get back to writing too. Hopefully starting tomorrow.... If I survive today ...especially if my daughter doesn't like what I've done. LOL I might need bail!

Thank you as always for the wonderful thoughts and for the stars. You are so good to me.

Hope all is well with you!
Smiles and hugs and all my love, Carol