If flowers could dance
What a sight.36 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Willie, they do dance in the breeze. They give us joy with the spectacular colors and the perfume on the wind. I loved your poem, obviously you are a nature lover. The heads of the massive sunflowers move to catch the sunlight. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem. K xx
  |
Willie, they do dance in the breeze. They give us joy with the spectacular colors and the perfume on the wind. I loved your poem, obviously you are a nature lover. The heads of the massive sunflowers move to catch the sunlight. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem. K xx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
Comment from JanPerry
I like your ideas in this one with the dancing flower, it looks like a child drew this one.
I really like the font you have used also.
I think it may be too long for a child, simply because their attention span is short. It fulfils the requirements.
 |
I like your ideas in this one with the dancing flower, it looks like a child drew this one.
I really like the font you have used also.
I think it may be too long for a child, simply because their attention span is short. It fulfils the requirements.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Rene Tyo
A fun, light-hearted and whimsical read, I really enjoy this poem. This is a lovely ode to romance, well constructed and thought out. Well done. The children's art is a wonderful choice as well for the picture.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
 |
A fun, light-hearted and whimsical read, I really enjoy this poem. This is a lovely ode to romance, well constructed and thought out. Well done. The children's art is a wonderful choice as well for the picture.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from nomi338
Hmm. If flowers could dance, who would provide the tune?
Would they dance all year long or only in June.
If flowers could dance, would they waltz or jitterbug
If flowers could dance, would they flirt with butterflies, or would they step on a water bug
If flowers could dance, would one dance for me,
or would it hide its face so that I might not see.
Beautiful prose.
|
Hmm. If flowers could dance, who would provide the tune?
Would they dance all year long or only in June.
If flowers could dance, would they waltz or jitterbug
If flowers could dance, would they flirt with butterflies, or would they step on a water bug
If flowers could dance, would one dance for me,
or would it hide its face so that I might not see.
Beautiful prose.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
Delightful poem Willie.
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and totally agree, what a wonderful sight that would be to see.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
|
Delightful poem Willie.
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and totally agree, what a wonderful sight that would be to see.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a nice poem. I love flowers so to see them dance would be wonderful. I like your poem. It was so upbeat and positive. Well written.
|
What a nice poem. I love flowers so to see them dance would be wonderful. I like your poem. It was so upbeat and positive. Well written.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Shanbreen
What a wonderful flowery tribute to the beauty that nature provides us in life. You have painted a colorful picture and enhanced it with the "fragrance" of flowers and their motion as they dance. Well done Willie, and thanks for sharing your talent.
|
What a wonderful flowery tribute to the beauty that nature provides us in life. You have painted a colorful picture and enhanced it with the "fragrance" of flowers and their motion as they dance. Well done Willie, and thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Chip Whitley
What an excellent piece. I particularly enjoyed:
"Their fragrance filling
Every room,
Chasing away all
Loneliness and gloom." This really captured my imagination and evoked a deep sense of human emotion.
|
What an excellent piece. I particularly enjoyed:
"Their fragrance filling
Every room,
Chasing away all
Loneliness and gloom." This really captured my imagination and evoked a deep sense of human emotion.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Sarah Sandison
Lovely uplifting poem. I liked the calligraphy too, it reminds me of my youth, trying to write like that and never succeeding. I kind of think flowers dance anyway, particularly in the UK wind!
|
Lovely uplifting poem. I liked the calligraphy too, it reminds me of my youth, trying to write like that and never succeeding. I kind of think flowers dance anyway, particularly in the UK wind!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and was a great pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
|
This is beautifully written and was a great pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
