Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spirited Justice chap 8"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I don't trust Johan in the least and Eleanor will need plenty of energy to find him and Hilda. Sophia does well to recognise people by their voices and cologne and sense their characters as well. Excellent continuation of your story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
  |
I don't trust Johan in the least and Eleanor will need plenty of energy to find him and Hilda. Sophia does well to recognise people by their voices and cologne and sense their characters as well. Excellent continuation of your story.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
-
I'm glad that you picked up on the senses (but of course you would!) and I hope others did too. I wanted to make sure people understood that she wasn't an invalid without purpose just because she was blind. She had much to offer. Thanks so much for the review and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
If the bad guys were to get the ghost detectives to help them in a robbery, what would it be called? A Polterheist! I will see myself out now. The story is keeping me entertained. Keep it coming!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
|
If the bad guys were to get the ghost detectives to help them in a robbery, what would it be called? A Polterheist! I will see myself out now. The story is keeping me entertained. Keep it coming!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
-
You are a devil! One of the good kind of course! I couldn't help but laugh at that one.... Awesome! Thanks for the chuckle added to my smiles. What a day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So your ghost can get exhausted and Jenna has to worry about he mother's well being even though she is dead. Sophia should like she had a scary experience. She is sensitive enough that she doesn't trust oneone who claimes he wants to help.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
|
So your ghost can get exhausted and Jenna has to worry about he mother's well being even though she is dead. Sophia should like she had a scary experience. She is sensitive enough that she doesn't trust oneone who claimes he wants to help.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
-
I guess my ghosts were created within my own thoughts since I have nothing to compare it with so I see them as another extension of life. Thanks for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing is full of suspense! I was completely drawn into the scene, feeling Angelo's confusion and Eleanor's determination. The way you blend the supernatural elements with the tension of the unfolding mystery is masterful as always. It's a thrilling piece that left me wanting to read more - fantastic job!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
|
Your writing is full of suspense! I was completely drawn into the scene, feeling Angelo's confusion and Eleanor's determination. The way you blend the supernatural elements with the tension of the unfolding mystery is masterful as always. It's a thrilling piece that left me wanting to read more - fantastic job!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
-
Thank you, Michael. I've missed you and I was afraid you weren't enjoying the story. I appreciate the review and your thoughtful words. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story gets better and better with every post. Thank you for sharing it with us.
See what you remember about what happened." Eleanor's voice was calm and reassuring. "Do you remember what t happened," Eleanor's voice was calm and reassuring, "Do...)
I think that's about the time I heard you.too." (you, too."
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
 |
This story gets better and better with every post. Thank you for sharing it with us.
See what you remember about what happened." Eleanor's voice was calm and reassuring. "Do you remember what t happened," Eleanor's voice was calm and reassuring, "Do...)
I think that's about the time I heard you.too." (you, too."
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
-
Since I lost those three chapters, I get scared every time I write. I worry if I will remember what direction the story should go or if I've got things right. I am second guessing myself all the time. Today I started at four this morning and just decided to post it now. Crazy!
Thanks for the awesome thoughts and the stars. I am truly grateful.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
-
You're deserving. Trust yourself. You're amazing.
-
Thank you!
