Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The mission"A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
15 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I don't know where you are going with this, because Doddie is immature and impulsive. However it is still a big pull. Iwill keep reading. I need a nap. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I don't know where you are going with this, because Doddie is immature and impulsive. However it is still a big pull. Iwill keep reading. I need a nap. Karen :-)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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You must've stayed up too late, lol. Thank you, Karen. I always enjoy your reviews and your work.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from GWHARGIS
Bodies Rae is a smart cookie. She seems to enjoy taunting the police but she also is smart enough to play the game. Now that she has the other women's addresses all I can say is look out bad boys. Dodie seems to have found her purpose in life... and she really seems to love that purpose. Another great chapter. Question for you: is horror/sinister/spooky your genre? Or do you venture out of that? I do love a good horror story and you, my fine friend, are giving me a great one. Keep it coming. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Bodies Rae is a smart cookie. She seems to enjoy taunting the police but she also is smart enough to play the game. Now that she has the other women's addresses all I can say is look out bad boys. Dodie seems to have found her purpose in life... and she really seems to love that purpose. Another great chapter. Question for you: is horror/sinister/spooky your genre? Or do you venture out of that? I do love a good horror story and you, my fine friend, are giving me a great one. Keep it coming. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen for this excellent review, my friend. To answer your question, I love the macabre. This is my passion in writing, I have written outside of this genre, but not in Novel form. Mostly short pieces and Haiku.
I'm a huge Stephen King fan.
God bless,
Steve
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Good to know. I love reading scary and supernatural stuff. Loving this and will be excited for the next
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The Next book in this series (yes, I said series) is one hell of a twist. What's Dodie Rae going to do after all the abusers are eradicated?
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There are plenty of scumbags . She won't be idle. Or she'll share the potion with a few. I'm excited to hear this.
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LOL! She can create an army. If I had one month to dedicate to writing this, no interruptions. I would be finished and on to the next one.
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I feel your pain. Working sure cuts into good creativity.
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Yes!
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how you keep exploring Dodie's personality further with each other and her character always really shines through in the writing. I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I love how you keep exploring Dodie's personality further with each other and her character always really shines through in the writing. I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Jacob, I'm exciting that you continue to follow. This means the world to me, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from royowen
So, Dodie Rae is definitely on a vendetta, to eradicate all those abusive males that are a curse on mankind, who abuse their women, in fact I hate abuse, it's such a blot on mankind, it would be good to clear the world of child abusers, beautifully written Steve, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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So, Dodie Rae is definitely on a vendetta, to eradicate all those abusive males that are a curse on mankind, who abuse their women, in fact I hate abuse, it's such a blot on mankind, it would be good to clear the world of child abusers, beautifully written Steve, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I hate abuse as well and find solace in the fiction, that it can be eradicated. I have the next book in mind as well. I'm looking to have a continuing series with Dodie Rae.
What will she do when all the bad boys are dead?
I know the answer, lol.
God bless, my friend.
Steve
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Well done
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Cool chapter. Best line:
"You might want to watch your back out there, Officer Riley. It appears this animal has a taste for assholes."
LOL I like Dodie Rae. Is that a bad thing? LOL Kee[ 'em coming!
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Cool chapter. Best line:
"You might want to watch your back out there, Officer Riley. It appears this animal has a taste for assholes."
LOL I like Dodie Rae. Is that a bad thing? LOL Kee[ 'em coming!
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Lol. No, I like her too. Thank you, Marilyn, for the excellent review. You got to it before I could promote it.
God bless,
Steve
