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Comment from lyenochka
This makes me think of how God sees us beyond our current mortal selves. He sees us fully redeemed. I liked the description of the eyes as "golden twilight irises and pupils of starless night". But I wish for a little more than "beautiful" - I know you'll come up with something!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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This makes me think of how God sees us beyond our current mortal selves. He sees us fully redeemed. I liked the description of the eyes as "golden twilight irises and pupils of starless night". But I wish for a little more than "beautiful" - I know you'll come up with something!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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I was thinking about Jesus 😊
Thank you very much, big sister. I changed splendid instead of beautiful.
Love ❤️
Marival 😊
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I like splendid ! And if it Jesus, "divine" works.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Beautifully written my friend. I like that you forgoed (is that a word?) the multicolored font and used just one that matched the eye. Seemed appropriate here.
Nice work, my talented friend.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Beautifully written my friend. I like that you forgoed (is that a word?) the multicolored font and used just one that matched the eye. Seemed appropriate here.
Nice work, my talented friend.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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I looked twice and didn't found that error.
Thank you very much, Douglas
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I once asked God to see myself through another's eyes that had betrayed me and my family, and Lo and behold, He granted me that wish, I was amazed, and understood why he did, it didn't excuse the act, but I understood, and it was easier to forgive, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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I once asked God to see myself through another's eyes that had betrayed me and my family, and Lo and behold, He granted me that wish, I was amazed, and understood why he did, it didn't excuse the act, but I understood, and it was easier to forgive, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Yes, I agree
Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Well done