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Comment from Douglas Goff
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There really is no other feeling quite like a broken heart. It even expounds the other feelings like anger, hate, and sorrow. Interesting. I guess love is it's Yang.

Most enjoyable and thought-provoking. I do not enjoy your work any less, I have just been on a different site with a few of the others. Imam doing VERY well there.

Appreciate you!
Douglas

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Douglas

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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It's so true. Even though we have to go through a lot of brokenness to go to God and realize that He alone can truly love us fully, His light of love will shine through and mend our broken hearts.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Yes, that's true. Thank you very much, big sister ❤️

    Love

    Marival ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
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This is quite relatable to my own situation. God did enter through those cracks and in came his light, and with conscious changes, the love of my life.also came.
Very beautiful words tha encourages us to see the only perfect love comes from God.
RJ

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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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very nice sweetly hopeful gogyohka
love the thought of through the cracks light will enter
powerful.

one suggestion i have is for this line:
don't you fear don't you cry--
i think it needs a hyphen, comma, or semicolon after 'fear'
don't you fear- don't you cry-

other than that, a great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley. I added a dash 😊

    Gypsy