The Road We Call Loneliness
Free verse on loneliness22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Road We Call Loneliness, is representative of that sorrowful feeling that one is truly alone, and all suffering is felt alone and not witnessed or addressed.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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This poem, The Road We Call Loneliness, is representative of that sorrowful feeling that one is truly alone, and all suffering is felt alone and not witnessed or addressed.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much Bill for your lovely comments and review!
Take care and enjoy your week!
Comment from estory
I thought the longer, more languid lines caught the mood of the theme here, very somber, self reflective. The imagery caught my eye too, the long, empty stretches of sea and lonely roads, leading to nowhere, really illustrates the sense of loneliness, of reaching out and grasping...nothing. estory
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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I thought the longer, more languid lines caught the mood of the theme here, very somber, self reflective. The imagery caught my eye too, the long, empty stretches of sea and lonely roads, leading to nowhere, really illustrates the sense of loneliness, of reaching out and grasping...nothing. estory
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments review and stellar rating! So glad you liked it!
Comment from patcelaw
You expressed the road of loneliness very well in this poem and I enjoyed very much reading it. It flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a wonderful week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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You expressed the road of loneliness very well in this poem and I enjoyed very much reading it. It flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a wonderful week. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thank you so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Great entry for the contest love the last stanza
I wander, disassociated from reality
playing solitaire in this game called life.
Stumbling wildly down the road we call loneliness.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Great entry for the contest love the last stanza
I wander, disassociated from reality
playing solitaire in this game called life.
Stumbling wildly down the road we call loneliness.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Neonewman
Loneliness can lead to depression, which seems to happen in this well-crafted piece. This is an excellent entry for this Lonely Poem contest. Best of luck and well done.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Loneliness can lead to depression, which seems to happen in this well-crafted piece. This is an excellent entry for this Lonely Poem contest. Best of luck and well done.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much Steve for your lovely comments and review!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Steve Foreman
This is a really good evocative and emotive poem, with a good choice of words and metaphor's, that really encompasses the subject of loneliness.
I had no six stars remaining. Sorry!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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This is a really good evocative and emotive poem, with a good choice of words and metaphor's, that really encompasses the subject of loneliness.
I had no six stars remaining. Sorry!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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That's OK Steve. Your lovely comments and review are much appreciated!
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a real deep dive into the depths of loneliness. I felt the emptiness and lost feeling of nothingness throughout.
Quotes like... disassociated from reality, disjointed, withdrawn all convey so vividly the feelings of being lonely.
Excellent poem, a great entry for the contest
Best of luck
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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This is a real deep dive into the depths of loneliness. I felt the emptiness and lost feeling of nothingness throughout.
Quotes like... disassociated from reality, disjointed, withdrawn all convey so vividly the feelings of being lonely.
Excellent poem, a great entry for the contest
Best of luck
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much Nicki for your lovely comments, best wishes and review! Take care and enjoy your week!
Comment from royowen
Being lonely in a world that has so many humans who foundational function is to to live and naturally in a family is terrible, this is a beautifully written free verse, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : playing solitaire()in
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Being lonely in a world that has so many humans who foundational function is to to live and naturally in a family is terrible, this is a beautifully written free verse, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : playing solitaire()in
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much Roy for reviewing and catching that typo.
Blessings to you as well.
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Well done.
Comment from jenintorre
A very thought provoking poem. I think you have portrayed loneliness very well in this poem. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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A very thought provoking poem. I think you have portrayed loneliness very well in this poem. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much Jen for your lovely comments and review!
Take care and enjoy your week.
Comment from ESOSTINE
You penned a very creative poem which flow is as smooth as silent waters. I enjoyed reading the work. And I pray that we find company and consolation and never work alone. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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You penned a very creative poem which flow is as smooth as silent waters. I enjoyed reading the work. And I pray that we find company and consolation and never work alone. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments about my loneliness poem
So glad you liked it!