His Next Speech
Skirting the Issues17 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I try to stay out of politics especially on FS, but I couldn't help myself. You are so brave to flatly state your opinion knowing there probably would be lots of flack. Me... I liked the humor and couldn't resist telling you.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I try to stay out of politics especially on FS, but I couldn't help myself. You are so brave to flatly state your opinion knowing there probably would be lots of flack. Me... I liked the humor and couldn't resist telling you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol! 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Party Pooper #2 writing prompt. Bring your pooper scoops and a huge trash bag! Industrial size! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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An excellent entry for the Party Pooper #2 writing prompt. Bring your pooper scoops and a huge trash bag! Industrial size! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the great review!
Best wishes
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nice! You've got a playful and sharp tone here. The imagery of Trump "hiding behind kilts" and the call for "pooper scoopers" adds a clever twist. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Nice! You've got a playful and sharp tone here. The imagery of Trump "hiding behind kilts" and the call for "pooper scoopers" adds a clever twist. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem offers a sharp, satirical take on Trump's communication style, using playful rhymes and vivid imagery to convey criticism. The creative use of language, such as "despot trooper" and "pooper scoopers," adds a humorous and biting tone. The imagery of hiding behind "kilts" and "skirts" cleverly suggests evasion of important issues. Overall, your poem effectively combines wit and critique in a memorable way, though refining the rhythm and flow could enhance its impact even further.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This poem offers a sharp, satirical take on Trump's communication style, using playful rhymes and vivid imagery to convey criticism. The creative use of language, such as "despot trooper" and "pooper scoopers," adds a humorous and biting tone. The imagery of hiding behind "kilts" and "skirts" cleverly suggests evasion of important issues. Overall, your poem effectively combines wit and critique in a memorable way, though refining the rhythm and flow could enhance its impact even further.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you, for the constructive review, Patty.
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Omg, I love how you frankly put it in humorous words and sum it all up under a five short limerick sentences. Pretty clever, and funny too; especially your art picture is funny. Your political topic is a nice, friendly way of conveying your message across. I do not have a 6 star option or else it worth an exceptional rate. Best of luck in winning!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Omg, I love how you frankly put it in humorous words and sum it all up under a five short limerick sentences. Pretty clever, and funny too; especially your art picture is funny. Your political topic is a nice, friendly way of conveying your message across. I do not have a 6 star option or else it worth an exceptional rate. Best of luck in winning!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you, reviewer, for the nice review and comments.
Cindy
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You're so welcome and have a nice wonderful day!
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You're so welcome, and have a beautiful day Cindy!
Comment from lyenochka
I agree with your assessment of Trump. The odd thing to me is that the Republicans who claim to be conservative Christians are having a criminal and amoral person represent them. It's like the Pharisees who plotted to kill Jesus because He healed people on the Sabbath. The Sabbath was more important to them than God. For some Republicans, their power in office is more important to them than following God. Sorry for the rant.
Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I agree with your assessment of Trump. The odd thing to me is that the Republicans who claim to be conservative Christians are having a criminal and amoral person represent them. It's like the Pharisees who plotted to kill Jesus because He healed people on the Sabbath. The Sabbath was more important to them than God. For some Republicans, their power in office is more important to them than following God. Sorry for the rant.
Best wishes in the contest!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Lyenochka for the heartfelt review. I agree with you wholeheartedly. So well put!
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment from royowen
I seem to remember that Donald Trump's mother was born in the outer Hebrides on the island of Lewis, where the they actually had a revival, I've been to the isle of Skye, in the inner Hebrides, the place that Bonny Prince Charlie escaped to.when he was fleeing the British, beautifully written Cindy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I seem to remember that Donald Trump's mother was born in the outer Hebrides on the island of Lewis, where the they actually had a revival, I've been to the isle of Skye, in the inner Hebrides, the place that Bonny Prince Charlie escaped to.when he was fleeing the British, beautifully written Cindy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Roy, for the wonderful review and the smile in your comments!
And thank you for the six stars!
Blessings and best wishes,
Cindy
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Bless you Cindy
