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Comment from Nicki.B
This is so good! I was giggling right through, the image is hilarious and the words you've put together with the innuendos are so funny. I mean come on, Elvis as a banana how could you not find this funny!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is so good! I was giggling right through, the image is hilarious and the words you've put together with the innuendos are so funny. I mean come on, Elvis as a banana how could you not find this funny!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Nicki! Banana Elvis will be back...
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Haha! Love it!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written poem, and a real treat to read and hilariously scribed, an unusual post and the great humour gives a leg up, I'm impressed by the ease with which this saucy entry in this contest has gone, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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A beautifully written poem, and a real treat to read and hilariously scribed, an unusual post and the great humour gives a leg up, I'm impressed by the ease with which this saucy entry in this contest has gone, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Roy, thank you for the incredibly kind words. It was a real fun one to write.
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Well done
Comment from Jacob1395
I thought this was really well written and I liked how you put your poem together. I could really get a sense of the excitement and sense of anticipation as well as I was reading. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I thought this was really well written and I liked how you put your poem together. I could really get a sense of the excitement and sense of anticipation as well as I was reading. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you Jacob. The only thing more exciting than a dancing Banana Elvis is a dancing gorilla.
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Comment from Begin Again
I definitely thought of it as a song...not my type but great for some... as I read it. It definitely has a message to deliver and some girls might jump on it and others just prefer to dance.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I definitely thought of it as a song...not my type but great for some... as I read it. It definitely has a message to deliver and some girls might jump on it and others just prefer to dance.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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As of yesterday morning a song is now actually in progress, and somewhat of in the style of Elvis, with a modern twist. Thank you Carol!
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Comment from Barry Penfold
totally a fun poem. Love the image and of course it had to have the sexual vibe. I like this. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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totally a fun poem. Love the image and of course it had to have the sexual vibe. I like this. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much Barry!
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Comment from Earl Corp
This is nan awesome picture you chose to accompany your poem. Unfortunately it gave away the punchline. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was funny. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is nan awesome picture you chose to accompany your poem. Unfortunately it gave away the punchline. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was funny. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. Somehow I pulled off a win with it. No one can resist Banana Elvis!
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