Good morning little one
The poem of a baby bird I saw in a tree next to the house14 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This poem is so sweet and gentle. You write with tenderness and love for the young life of a baby bird. I like the repeating line. It accentuates the meaning of the new life becoming free to fly. I am amazed at your ability to capture the raw nature of the little bird so close to your house.
Your love of nature is compelling.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This poem is so sweet and gentle. You write with tenderness and love for the young life of a baby bird. I like the repeating line. It accentuates the meaning of the new life becoming free to fly. I am amazed at your ability to capture the raw nature of the little bird so close to your house.
Your love of nature is compelling.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you Jesse for your great review. This is the first time I got so close to a baby bird. We had three Nests with babies all over the yard. Thank you again.
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That is lovely. Baby birds are so tender and sweet. I can almost remember the day I saw a baby bird myself. It was so long ago. I'm glad you got the picture of the bird in the nest.
Jesse
Comment from zanya
It's a delight to read a poem about the natural world especially around the time of the rearing of new chicks and their eventual fledging - Nature lifts our spirits.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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It's a delight to read a poem about the natural world especially around the time of the rearing of new chicks and their eventual fledging - Nature lifts our spirits.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Brenda, this is such a tender tribute to something you witnessed one day. I like the metaphor implied here: parents often watch their children grow, and then one sad day they leave home, hopefully for a good life ahead.
Excellent poem, Brenda,
Best wishes,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Brenda, this is such a tender tribute to something you witnessed one day. I like the metaphor implied here: parents often watch their children grow, and then one sad day they leave home, hopefully for a good life ahead.
Excellent poem, Brenda,
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Oh, so beautiful written poetry, and it a pleasant, fun messages to the reader(s). You have met the 5star excellent rating criteria. From the beginning to the end, you did it great, including your artwork image. I wish you the best to this piece.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Oh, so beautiful written poetry, and it a pleasant, fun messages to the reader(s). You have met the 5star excellent rating criteria. From the beginning to the end, you did it great, including your artwork image. I wish you the best to this piece.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this great review. I really appreciate it.