The Flamingo
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Comment from judiverse
What a sight to see! I hope the flamingo will stay around. I hope she'll be able to find a warm place when the time comes, however. Beautifully expressed. Great words about how she brings a smile to those who see her. Lovely artwork by one of the FanArtReview artists. judi
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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What a sight to see! I hope the flamingo will stay around. I hope she'll be able to find a warm place when the time comes, however. Beautifully expressed. Great words about how she brings a smile to those who see her. Lovely artwork by one of the FanArtReview artists. judi
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is quite a sighting here on Cape Cod. I think it is the first time a flamingo has appeared here. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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You're welcome. Amazing the flamingo showed up there. judi
Comment from gansach
I enjoyed your poem. We, too, here in Wisconsin had a small flock of flamingoes pay us a visit to several of our waterways and lakes in the area. Photos and video were all over the news and social media for these strange visitors. I like the pink presentation and artwork. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. We, too, here in Wisconsin had a small flock of flamingoes pay us a visit to several of our waterways and lakes in the area. Photos and video were all over the news and social media for these strange visitors. I like the pink presentation and artwork. Nicely done!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. How amazing! A flock of flamingos! Elaine
Comment from Sally Law
My first thought was, how the heck did a flamingo escape Florida and make it all the way to Cape Cod? I'm surprised to learn they do pretty well in the colder climates. Who knew. Thanks for sharing, Mermaids.
Sending you my best today from Flamingo land.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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My first thought was, how the heck did a flamingo escape Florida and make it all the way to Cape Cod? I'm surprised to learn they do pretty well in the colder climates. Who knew. Thanks for sharing, Mermaids.
Sending you my best today from Flamingo land.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I couldn't believe it either! I was wondering why the bird would leave Florida? Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Bryce 1
She's a star to me. What a great privilege it is to be born so beautiful and different. That's awesome. But she doesn't really know it. It's all normal to her
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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She's a star to me. What a great privilege it is to be born so beautiful and different. That's awesome. But she doesn't really know it. It's all normal to her
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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They definitely are stars in all their beauty. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, mermaids.
That is too far north for flamingos But maybe the southern waters are getting too warm so they're moving north with their prey possibly
I did a painting of flamingos. There were two bears dancing, and one flapping his wings and crashing the party. So I named it flamingo dance party crasher
I may repost it here at some point.
I love your poem. It describes your scenic view.
The long flamingo in your image is aesthetic to the eyes
I haven't seen too many of your posts. I just came back in May after a five year hiatus from fan story. So, I've been back for a little less than three months
But you write very well thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hi, mermaids.
That is too far north for flamingos But maybe the southern waters are getting too warm so they're moving north with their prey possibly
I did a painting of flamingos. There were two bears dancing, and one flapping his wings and crashing the party. So I named it flamingo dance party crasher
I may repost it here at some point.
I love your poem. It describes your scenic view.
The long flamingo in your image is aesthetic to the eyes
I haven't seen too many of your posts. I just came back in May after a five year hiatus from fan story. So, I've been back for a little less than three months
But you write very well thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I would love to see your painting! Glad you have returned. I am trying to get back into the swing of writing after being away for awhile. I appreciate your thoughtful and encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
That's great, your writing style is pleasant, and it's so easily understandable. I love how you used a Flamingo as a Metaphor, and her description beauties are enjoyable to read. I love your artwork too! Congrats to your piece, and wish you all the best.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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That's great, your writing style is pleasant, and it's so easily understandable. I love how you used a Flamingo as a Metaphor, and her description beauties are enjoyable to read. I love your artwork too! Congrats to your piece, and wish you all the best.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I am honored by your encouraging words. Thank you for taking time to read my poem and enjoying my words. Elaine