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A Good Girl

An old dog tries to please her master.

13 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
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It cannot be easy parting with a beloved pet. It certainly cannot be easy on the animal who does not understand why they are being left behind. They have to wonder what they might have done wrong. This was a wise and understanding assessment of what might be going on in the mind of the pet being left behind.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction contest. Oh, I wasn't ready for the turn this story took. A flash story from a pet's point of view of the saddest day in a pet owner's life. Well-written. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This is a sad story. Lots of people abandon their pets though it's true. You conveyed a message with this flash fiction piece. Our pets suffer when we abandon them. Good luck with the contest! Happy writing!

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!