Clouds
Find the animals.12 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Well done on this imaginative loop poem which traces the formation of animal shapes in the clouds, then the onset of a sudden storm, whic is soon replaced by peace again for nature, replete with animal shapes again. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Well done on this imaginative loop poem which traces the formation of animal shapes in the clouds, then the onset of a sudden storm, whic is soon replaced by peace again for nature, replete with animal shapes again. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hello Wendy, Thanks for reading - something different for a change. Thank you for the best wishes. K xx
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Aussie
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Oh. I get it. You're looking at clouds and they have shapes. That's so much fun. I used to do that by myself as a kid and I always found animals and other things in the shapes.
Just don't put a lion close to a lamb. That will be disaster
You do a very good job of searching the clouds that you're seeing. I didn't know that it was lying down and looking at clouds until the very end.
That is why your entry has strength. Your last line is kind of a satori line But it's really your last stanza not just the last line that stands out.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi, Aussie
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Oh. I get it. You're looking at clouds and they have shapes. That's so much fun. I used to do that by myself as a kid and I always found animals and other things in the shapes.
Just don't put a lion close to a lamb. That will be disaster
You do a very good job of searching the clouds that you're seeing. I didn't know that it was lying down and looking at clouds until the very end.
That is why your entry has strength. Your last line is kind of a satori line But it's really your last stanza not just the last line that stands out.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hello Pam, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. Something different. Cloud dreaming is good for meditation. K xx