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The permanence of the written word17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, when I ask people how did they learn the word of God, and how does scripture pop into one's head, it's because were recited it over and over, we soak up word by what we read more than hearing them, beautifully written Maria, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Oh yes, when I ask people how did they learn the word of God, and how does scripture pop into one's head, it's because were recited it over and over, we soak up word by what we read more than hearing them, beautifully written Maria, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reading, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When books are banned or start burning it is a time when we should be very worried Heather. I enjoyed your poignant words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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When books are banned or start burning it is a time when we should be very worried Heather. I enjoyed your poignant words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Indeed. Thanks for your review.x
Comment from Neonewman
This is an excellent entry for this six-word poetry contest, paired well with the artwork above. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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This is an excellent entry for this six-word poetry contest, paired well with the artwork above. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reading, Steve.
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my pleasure, Heather
Comment from Sally Law
I know what you mean. For me, a push of a button and it's gonezo! I had to call in Tom the Administrator this week, again. A great little 6 word poem and so relatable.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I know what you mean. For me, a push of a button and it's gonezo! I had to call in Tom the Administrator this week, again. A great little 6 word poem and so relatable.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your kind review, Sally.
I hope Tom was able to solve your problem. x
Comment from patcelaw
You did well expressing in six words what the image means to you. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and a wonderful week. Pat
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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You did well expressing in six words what the image means to you. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and a wonderful week. Pat
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reading, Pat.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This 6-word poem beautifully captures a fleeting moment of creativity and its eventual dissolution. The imagery of "words swirl" and "twirl" evokes a sense of dynamic motion, while "ink to nothingness" poignantly suggests the ephemeral nature of writing and ideas. To enhance clarity and impact, consider a slight adjustment in punctuation or phrasing to emphasize the transition from creation to dissolution. Overall, it's a powerful and evocative piece that leaves a lasting impression.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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This 6-word poem beautifully captures a fleeting moment of creativity and its eventual dissolution. The imagery of "words swirl" and "twirl" evokes a sense of dynamic motion, while "ink to nothingness" poignantly suggests the ephemeral nature of writing and ideas. To enhance clarity and impact, consider a slight adjustment in punctuation or phrasing to emphasize the transition from creation to dissolution. Overall, it's a powerful and evocative piece that leaves a lasting impression.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your thorough review, Patty.
How would you change the punctuation?
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Sorry if that went through ten times. It's not showing here lol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Unique 6 word poem about the impermanence of even the written word. You can put the words in writing and bind them in leather but they can be discarded as easy as someone can ignore and discard the words you speak. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Unique 6 word poem about the impermanence of even the written word. You can put the words in writing and bind them in leather but they can be discarded as easy as someone can ignore and discard the words you speak. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much, Marilyn. I just reviewed the poem about your daughter.