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Comment from shelley kaye
love the rainbow "dripping" from the picture!! way cool!
it's actually really cool to see ashes floating in the ocean... it does change colours and looks like someone swimming away...
anyway, the was an excellent jisei suite of saying goodbye yet hello...
awesome imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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love the rainbow "dripping" from the picture!! way cool!
it's actually really cool to see ashes floating in the ocean... it does change colours and looks like someone swimming away...
anyway, the was an excellent jisei suite of saying goodbye yet hello...
awesome imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate the outstanding six stars review.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
There are a lot of people who come to the Outer Banks to spread their loved one's ashes. I have witnessed some beautiful scenes. This was a sad yet very heartwarming and confirming poem. Confirming the fact that our loved ones never leave us, they just change forms. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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There are a lot of people who come to the Outer Banks to spread their loved one's ashes. I have witnessed some beautiful scenes. This was a sad yet very heartwarming and confirming poem. Confirming the fact that our loved ones never leave us, they just change forms. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. This is what I believe.
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Comment from Patty Mazzurco
The poem was very deeply moving to me, with its vivid imagery of tears blending with the sea and ashes carried by the waves.
It conveys a poignant mix of sorrow and solace, (the colors truly added to this!)
capturing the essence of a loved one's departure while offering reassurance of their enduring presence. The natural elements--seabirds, waves, and lavender breezes(LOVE!)
--create a comforting and serene atmosphere, suggesting that even in grief, there is a lasting connection and a gentle, loving presence.(YES!)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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The poem was very deeply moving to me, with its vivid imagery of tears blending with the sea and ashes carried by the waves.
It conveys a poignant mix of sorrow and solace, (the colors truly added to this!)
capturing the essence of a loved one's departure while offering reassurance of their enduring presence. The natural elements--seabirds, waves, and lavender breezes(LOVE!)
--create a comforting and serene atmosphere, suggesting that even in grief, there is a lasting connection and a gentle, loving presence.(YES!)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patty.
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Comment from T.D. Hoitsma
Another great read, for me the imagery showed a broken soul scared to leave this world. Almost as if there was unfinished business that had to be done before departing this realm. In the end it felt as if the choice was made to move on and not to be scared on what's to come.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Another great read, for me the imagery showed a broken soul scared to leave this world. Almost as if there was unfinished business that had to be done before departing this realm. In the end it felt as if the choice was made to move on and not to be scared on what's to come.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, TD.
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, this one couldn't be more beautiful, either visually or with the wording of how a departed soul will keep watch over her loved ones. The stained glass effect is just breathtaking! What a beautiful package this is. xoxox
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Well, this one couldn't be more beautiful, either visually or with the wording of how a departed soul will keep watch over her loved ones. The stained glass effect is just breathtaking! What a beautiful package this is. xoxox
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
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My pleasure
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Bravos, congrats to your "Jisei Poem for Haiku Club," & "Morn Billows and Eventides," it's an exceptional, a 6stars for your poetry messages and your artworks are beautifully go hands in hands with your story telling, I love it! I hope and pray for you to win, best of lucks to your awesome piece!!!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Bravos, congrats to your "Jisei Poem for Haiku Club," & "Morn Billows and Eventides," it's an exceptional, a 6stars for your poetry messages and your artworks are beautifully go hands in hands with your story telling, I love it! I hope and pray for you to win, best of lucks to your awesome piece!!!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, iDri.Luv.Jesus. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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You are so welcome, and have a nice day!
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You are so welcome, and you earned it + have a nice day!