Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Jenna and Dylan start out discussing their regrets, but are willing to put them behind them, then start by reading one of the letters, which was a bit telling about Eleanor's mental state at the time of the letter. She was sad at the lost of Charles during a vulnerable time.
Then we go to Nick, who is fighting for his life and gives some much needed information about Megan, but no one is there to understand.
We end with the girls being held in a basement and due to be sold off at some time or other. There seems to be very little hope outside of some determination on the part of Sarah who is a fellow hostage.
Great stuff,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Jenna and Dylan start out discussing their regrets, but are willing to put them behind them, then start by reading one of the letters, which was a bit telling about Eleanor's mental state at the time of the letter. She was sad at the lost of Charles during a vulnerable time.
Then we go to Nick, who is fighting for his life and gives some much needed information about Megan, but no one is there to understand.
We end with the girls being held in a basement and due to be sold off at some time or other. There seems to be very little hope outside of some determination on the part of Sarah who is a fellow hostage.
Great stuff,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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A lot going on right now and more to come. Got to wrap this story up sooner or later but can't leave people hanging.
Smiles, Carol
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Very true!!
Comment from BethShelby
Jenna is learning a lot about Elaanot she didn't know. It seem she and Dylan became close friends fast. Megan is in a real mess and is starting to appreciate how good her life was before. You've got an interesting story with a lot of thing going on at once.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Jenna is learning a lot about Elaanot she didn't know. It seem she and Dylan became close friends fast. Megan is in a real mess and is starting to appreciate how good her life was before. You've got an interesting story with a lot of thing going on at once.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I think Jenna became close to Dylan because of the connection between Eleanor and Charles. She's got a soft heart for Eleanor and anyone who helped her in one way or another.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This chapter was the most exciting. I'm sure you won't let all those poor girls be sold as sex slaves. So far, so good. I like the way this story is unfolding.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This chapter was the most exciting. I'm sure you won't let all those poor girls be sold as sex slaves. So far, so good. I like the way this story is unfolding.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I'm doing my best to stop that from happening. I'm working on all the angles and trying to solve things as I go. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a really good chapter. I hope Garth gets to Nick or Matthew does. Nick's ready to come clean.
Megan's lips quivered as she fought back her tears (after tears, Evil Eddie has played with your manuscript)
settled across the room until Sarah spoke. "I've been trying to keep track (spoke,)
Sarah responded next. "We all are, sweetie. (next,)
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This is a really good chapter. I hope Garth gets to Nick or Matthew does. Nick's ready to come clean.
Megan's lips quivered as she fought back her tears (after tears, Evil Eddie has played with your manuscript)
settled across the room until Sarah spoke. "I've been trying to keep track (spoke,)
Sarah responded next. "We all are, sweetie. (next,)
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I don't know if Nick is talking through his unconscious state or if he's aware. He'd make an excellent witness against the judge if he survives.
I got another gift from the aftermath of the tornado...while clearing things, I managed to play fissy face with poison ivy. My eyes are swollen and my entire face itches. Fun!
Having fun trying to write with squinting eyes. the story must go one!
Smiles, Carol
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Poison Ivy isn't good. I'm praying.
