Love is in the air
A poem about the aversion to love16 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed listening to your phone very well. I also enjoyed your presentation. I would enjoy it. I think more had you major font size a little larger but because I can listen to it, I don't necessarily have to be able to read it with my vision problems. Patric.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed listening to your phone very well. I also enjoyed your presentation. I would enjoy it. I think more had you major font size a little larger but because I can listen to it, I don't necessarily have to be able to read it with my vision problems. Patric.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Love is in the Air, should include a subtitle saying (Wear a mask). The persona put out here suggests that the thrill of meeting and dating someone is so far back on the burner that it seems like a struggling campfire on the far horizon of the Gobi Desert.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This poem, Love is in the Air, should include a subtitle saying (Wear a mask). The persona put out here suggests that the thrill of meeting and dating someone is so far back on the burner that it seems like a struggling campfire on the far horizon of the Gobi Desert.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Well that writes better than my poem.
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Well that writes better than my poem.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is well written poem. Poetry is not my strongest area of writing. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing and happy writing! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This is well written poem. Poetry is not my strongest area of writing. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing and happy writing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thanks
Comment from Amber Jones
Such a sweet and beautiful poem. I really like the different rhythm and rhyming of the different stanzas. I felt like the last line was very thought provoking, love is in the air and sometimes that can be scary....at least that's my interpretation. Good luck in future writings!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Such a sweet and beautiful poem. I really like the different rhythm and rhyming of the different stanzas. I felt like the last line was very thought provoking, love is in the air and sometimes that can be scary....at least that's my interpretation. Good luck in future writings!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you. Wow that was spot on.
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
Comparing thy heart to thy soul is deeply written with love. You have a beautiful way to write with a lot of passion. I honoured to read your writing and want to thank you.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Comparing thy heart to thy soul is deeply written with love. You have a beautiful way to write with a lot of passion. I honoured to read your writing and want to thank you.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thanks for seeing that.
Comment from royowen
You're a hot number when kissed, is that right? A very saucy work indeed, the one that is consumed by passion? Yes? No? A little bit of a good poem, short but packs a punch, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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You're a hot number when kissed, is that right? A very saucy work indeed, the one that is consumed by passion? Yes? No? A little bit of a good poem, short but packs a punch, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Ehhhh. Thank you. You saw the oh no here we go again behind the words.
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Well done