Comment from Samantha Wymer

Excellent

This poem is beautiful and even the picture goes wonderfully with your poem. This makes me even more excited to go on my vacation on the beach in a few weeks. I can't wait to drop in the deep and let my fears go. Great job.

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

I'm jealous lol a vacation by the beach sounds fantastic.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by Samantha Wymer on 18-Jul-2024

Your welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wow, a "sea of passion" - sounds a bit scary ! But even on a non-metaphorical view, the physical ocean is scary and we have to be careful not to drown. But in this heat, a dive into the ocean sounds great!

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

I'm terrified of drowning in the deep sea. Maybe because I watch too many scary movies.... lol

Im sorry if I over did it for you. A bit too dramatic? That is part of being a Spanish poet.

Thank you very much, big sister.

I keep thinking today is Friday 😊

Love

Marival

reply by lyenochka on 18-Jul-2024

I'm getting used to your Spanish passion. It's good you are broadening my senses!