Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from Wendy G
A super chapter. Just as well the car was seen - but he was a bit foolish to drive an official car on a late-night liaison. Margaret is not a good liar, and they will surely be able to track her call to Lydia. Donatelli may have to cooperate with Garth to get all these mysteries solved. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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A super chapter. Just as well the car was seen - but he was a bit foolish to drive an official car on a late-night liaison. Margaret is not a good liar, and they will surely be able to track her call to Lydia. Donatelli may have to cooperate with Garth to get all these mysteries solved. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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The judge is arrogant and believed he was infallible. those who think that way --- the harder they fall! And Lydia will do her best - but neither of them were born very good liars. I hope Garth and Donatelli will get on the same page.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Okay, I'm caught up with you again. Please continue to write fast so I can finish reading this exciting story. You do such a marvelous job with the dialogue and descriptions.
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Okay, I'm caught up with you again. Please continue to write fast so I can finish reading this exciting story. You do such a marvelous job with the dialogue and descriptions.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Thank you...It's tough getting the time to read so I can promote two chapters.... the writing is easy except on the eyes. One more review to answer and then I am off to start another chapter. See you soon!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Oh so it is a kidnapping for money instead of female trafficing. That is just as bad. He about to find out that the Judge isn't as upright as he wanted to believe he was. Another great chapter.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Oh so it is a kidnapping for money instead of female trafficing. That is just as bad. He about to find out that the Judge isn't as upright as he wanted to believe he was. Another great chapter.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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The judge didn't like Trevor blackmailing him and having to back down because of Eleanor, so he arranged to have Megan kidnapped. He didn't care what happened to her, so someone who was involved decided to cash in on the money end of it.
Smiles, Carol
