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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "I told him,he shoulda listened"Nefarious Deeds
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yep, you warned him. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I couldn't help but smile, but felt guilty about it. LOL Not for long. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
Yep, you warned him. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I couldn't help but smile, but felt guilty about it. LOL Not for long. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Her ner'do-well husband was shocked at her behavior. hahaha He was steamed she put the cooler on the dryer. haha Thanks for the read.
Karen
Comment from GWHARGIS
Now this was a cool story. I wasn't sure if this was the woman's husband or the repair man. Lol. But no matter, he should have fixed the damn thing or called a professional to do it. Zap. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
Now this was a cool story. I wasn't sure if this was the woman's husband or the repair man. Lol. But no matter, he should have fixed the damn thing or called a professional to do it. Zap. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Her ner'do-well husband was shocked at her behavior. hahaha He was steamed she put the cooler on the dryer. haha Thanks for the read.
Karen
Comment from Begin Again
He listened, but he never heard! The price one pays for complacency. LOL A very good 75 words for this flash fiction contest. Good job, Karen!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
He listened, but he never heard! The price one pays for complacency. LOL A very good 75 words for this flash fiction contest. Good job, Karen!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Men have a hard time hearing us when staring at our boobs. :-)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Perfect flash story with the kind of ending we all like. See where beer drinking gets you? lol Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Perfect flash story with the kind of ending we all like. See where beer drinking gets you? lol Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Men have a hard time hearing us when staring at our boobs. :-) Karen