A Sincere Prayer
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Each one of us could and should pray this prayer. Yes, our society is in a mess right now. Only God can fix it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Each one of us could and should pray this prayer. Yes, our society is in a mess right now. Only God can fix it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is very beautifully written for the dear God contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it flows very well. Your prayer is so sincere. I can feel your heart as you were praying it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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This is very beautifully written for the dear God contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it flows very well. Your prayer is so sincere. I can feel your heart as you were praying it. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I appreciate the review and comments. I hope your weekend is going well.
Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent prayer time. Thank you for sharing.
Fortunately/unfortunately, God is so insistent on people believing out of faith, that He will not make it easy by offering 'proofs'. As you well know, faith is believing what you can't see no matter how much we would like others to see.
My wife and I watched 'Bad Faith' yesterday... it's scary how men of God and politicians are twisting and manipulating church people.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Excellent prayer time. Thank you for sharing.
Fortunately/unfortunately, God is so insistent on people believing out of faith, that He will not make it easy by offering 'proofs'. As you well know, faith is believing what you can't see no matter how much we would like others to see.
My wife and I watched 'Bad Faith' yesterday... it's scary how men of God and politicians are twisting and manipulating church people.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you Wayne. I think I would like to watch that. What was that on? It is a documentary?
Beth
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On Prime it cost 99 cents. We watched for free with ads on Tubi.
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Thank you. I have prime. I pay 99 cent.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful entry for the Dear God contest. This is the prayer the world needs right now. The world we once knew seems so far away. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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A beautiful entry for the Dear God contest. This is the prayer the world needs right now. The world we once knew seems so far away. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Marilyn, I really appreciate your review ane comments.
Beth
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is lovely. A genuine tone throughout, sincere, honest and not in the least sanctimonious or lugubrious. Oftentimes, that's the problems I have with this genre. But you kept it a beautiful read from start to finish. Good luck in the Dear G-d contest! xo
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This is lovely. A genuine tone throughout, sincere, honest and not in the least sanctimonious or lugubrious. Oftentimes, that's the problems I have with this genre. But you kept it a beautiful read from start to finish. Good luck in the Dear G-d contest! xo
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you Rachelle. I feel a little uncomfortable writing a prayer for a contest. I have to think of it as actually talking to God. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
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Well, come on now, Beth - you know what Cinderella (or was in Snow White? Sleeping Beauty? Well, ONE of those Disney princesses!) said: A prayer is a wish your heart makes! No harm in putting a wish out there! xoxo
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Well I tried not to wish to win the contest and it worked. I didn't win. lol
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See? The Disney princess was right!!
Comment from Begin Again
Beautifully said and I know he is listening. We all need to repeat this prayer every day and others like them. The world is a sad place and it is often difficult who is telling the truth... I hope I never believe someone who is definitely lying. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Beautifully said and I know he is listening. We all need to repeat this prayer every day and others like them. The world is a sad place and it is often difficult who is telling the truth... I hope I never believe someone who is definitely lying. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you Carol, I appreciate the review and the six stars. It is hard to always recognize a lie.
Beth