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story of love, loss, new beginnings and secrets.

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Comment from BethShelby
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This sounds like female trafficing. The Judge is mixed in some shady business. It looks like Eleanor is going to have to do ghost voodoo if she reforms this family. She has her task cut out for her. I enjoyed this.

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 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
    The judge is just plain bad! He's involved in the art theft and so much more. It's time for him to get caught up in his own web.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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That judge is horrible and evil. I am glad Garth and Matthew are on it. Great post.

Eleanor chuckled. "If only you knew. It's is a ghost town." (It is a ghost town, or It's a ghost town.)

Megan giggled, "Bet he could liven our night up." (giggled.)

Too bad no one could hear her/ (her.)

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
    Good morning, Barbara! Eleanor's having some fun but I think when she hears about this... real firecrackers will be popping. Donatelli will be on the case... but the judge had one last stand with Margaret to cover himself. got to watch that man. Thank you so much for the shny stars and all your kindness.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a slimeball! But Eleanor knows what happened and she'll be after the Judge now. I hope. At first I thought it was Nick, but he was totally innocent of this. Things are really hotting up, Carol. Where are Garth, Tango and Poppa, or even Donatelli, for that matter! Another edge of the seat chapter, my friend. Well done! Love Sandra xxx

It's is a ghost town."

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
    Eleanor gets around faster than the guys! LOL And don't be giving Nick a free pass. Just saying! thanks for enjoying and for giving me something to smile about as well. It's storming real bad here so I hope I don't wash away. LOL Appreciate your kindness as always. Have a great day!
    Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol